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It was way good lol I wish I could find out if Trent ever meets someone to fall in love with and if Petras every becomes a worthy ruler but other than that I enjoyed it.

now that was a delicious well weave out tale full of delicious bunnies smux....hehehehe love it till the end, i litterly have a wide grin plaster on my face,and have to stop reading for a bit before starting again. Now i wonder if Trent will have his own love :)

awww, that was a nice story :)

What a beautiful ending for such a wonderful and entertaining story even though it was very upsetting and sad at times. I hope some day you write more about Wren and Petras. I would like to also read a side story featuring Trent and hope that he finds a lover like his father did. I really enjoyed reading this story and at first was very worried how it would all end, but Wren and Petras were meant for each other, and I am so happy they found love and peace.

Thanks for sharing and I loved reading it! You are a fantastic writer too!

I have read up to Chapter 18 so far and I must say that I am absolutely enthralled with your characters, diction and plot and find it very difficult not to think about their plight(s) even after my computer is turned off. I love this story so much, as I have few others on this site, and I very much hope you will continue it. It would be a great shame if you do not.

But, on to other matters. There was one point in a chapter when just one sentance seemed out of place. It was not as elequent as Wren's thoughts usually were. As I type this I am simultainiously searching for the spot that bothered my whilst reading... It is during a sex scene, the last sentance of one of the paragraphs, sometime after Chapter Eleven but before the Fifteenth... It just didn't seem as if it was something Wren would say, er, think. But you're the author, they are your characters, you know them better than I. Not to mention that I cannot seem to find the "offending" sentance any longer. Perhaps I only imagined it? What a silly notion.

Also, there was the part in a chapter where Petras seemed to remember killing Riza with his ice but then it seems to be reveled later that he was instead banished. How is it that he believes to have killed her? Or would that spoil the surprize? It's fine if it does. Consequently it is also fine if you have addressed this question already within your story, please excuse me if that is the case.

Thank you so much for you time :]

ahhhh I can't believe that I accidentally stumbled upon this wonderful story. The plot was well thought out and the characters are very interesting. I am, however, saddened to see that there is not an update date at the end of this latest chapter. I do hope that this do not mean you will be taking a break from this story for a while. Please put my curiosity to rest and update soon!
keep up the wonderful work love =]
-el

time to use the chaos demons' tactics and take out the women!...woman, actually. What are they? Ants? It's nice that Wren took Petras' back story with stride. Something tells me he will be needed in this battle. Ahh the cliffy is killing me.

Hi,

I am sorry I haven't reviewed yet but just noticed you had uploaded new chapter.

I felt bad for Petras and finding out he had murdered his friends but it could have been much worse, I guess. It was bad enough for him though and especially his poor friends.

I enjoyed it very much.

I have to get a double breast biopsy tomorrow so wish me luck. I am so nervous never had one before and then I have to wait 3/4 days for the results. I am a jittery mess so apologize for my review being short.

lol, Petras is probably the most petite Vanquisher Lord ever. This situation is not very good, and it looks like the worst case scenario might happen. The only thing stopping it is Trent, Talnoth, Wren, and Petras....good thing they are all working together. Truth be told, Petras's tragic back
story wasn't as bad as I predicted. I thought he single handedly caused the extinction of everyone in his world. Granted, killing your friends is very traumatizing, just not as much as my mind thought up.

Hi,

I was again too lazy to sign in, LOL, I am drinking coffee to try and wake myself up.

I really enjoyed reading the flashback at beginning of chapter and holy cow that was intense. I felt so bad for Petras' friends and what they went through thinking what their last thoughts of Petras must have been. I wonder if he will ever meet Riza again but probably not. I actually almost cried after reading this part. Silly me but that goes to show how well your writing is.

I knew Wren would somehow survive and now the group is together but how the heck are they going to get out of this?!!!

Thanks for letting us know when you plan to update again under the review/forum link I think that's a great idea.

Katie