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...wait...what happened in Los Angeles? I am very interested in what kind of deal Talnoth is offering. He never did explain. How could he be willing if Talnoth never explained anything to him? And does this mean humans can be turned into the sex slave people? Can't wait for more!

yeah aff.net has some really shitty rules about author content within the chapters. anyway new reader here! i love the story and can't wait to see what happens next! i hope he gets out soon.

This is very interesting. I wonder what happened in the past that he feels so guilty about? And will they really let him go free once he completes 10 courses? They seem too slimy and underhanded to let a source of profit go just like that. I hope they suffer....lol I look forward to more!

(By the way, isn't it against the rules to post previews for the next chapter? I won't report or anything, I just thought you might want some heads up)

quick update, nice.
oooh wow. that was uber cool. i loved every bit. turning out really well. i hope others read this story.
will be checking for updates.

this is um, interesting. whats with the kid, whats wrong with him?

OH! i like this. although the abuse and torture is off putting ya know? but i like this so far.
i bet that slave shoopped guy will attend that obstacle course thing.
i totally bet petras will win. i like his name by the way, and his appearance.
who is this 'lord vanq' guy?
hmmmm. and what is a 'haspian'?
OK, so im really really looking forward to reading more. oh, the games. have you read the 'hunger games' by suzann collins? i love that series. will it kind of be like gladiator games or something?, or... ok ok ok, im rambling and drowning this review with questions, I REALLY REALLY AM LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE.
ill be checking for updates, YOU BETCYA!
tentacles? um, im a fan of tentacles. lol. cant wait for that!
oh, and hes cursed? sheesh, interesting interesting interesting.