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September 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Hello, dear! I was very interested in your writing for this story, I actually read it to completion!
Would you email me? I'd like to talk to you about your story more and maybe about working together on an idea I have that I've been looking for the right author for! TakahashiAlice@yahoo.com
I look forwards to hearing from you!
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December 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I would love to read about what happens to Trent in New Angeles! :-D
This really was a wonderfully story! Thank you so much for sharing it, it was a pleasure to read!
This really was a wonderfully story! Thank you so much for sharing it, it was a pleasure to read!
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June 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This was a really beautiful story!!!! I'm so glad I discoverd your amazing storys through your story Sacrifices^^ I'm now continuing to read every single one of them although it might take me some time^^ Now on to this story!!! I really enjoyed how this story progressed and how you were able to balance the smutt with action and storyline^^ I also liked how the charakters progressed through the story!!! I really didn't expect petras to turn out ho be a vanquisher lord^^ Really surprised me there^^ And I'm especially glad you gave us an happy ending^^ And that the nei were speaking to him the whole time i really didn't expect that^^ Thanks for sharing this amazing story with us!!! And see you in your next story!!!
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April 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I just finished this and I loved it. Wonderful job. Xoxo Robin
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April 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I Love this story. I had to comment on how much I like your lizard aliens though with what I assume have very acidic. ..emissions. it got me thinking of their biology. Very interesting. The sex scenes are very good. I can't wait to see where things. Xoxo Robin
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July 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
..No.. No way! you did it again.. such a nice story but WHY make every one of your world story into an open American democracy.. and why .. does the frail little powerless character gets to Top.. in this case he not tops yet but gets to the TOP .. a king? really? of all the things.. not only a vanquisher lord..
..I like your stories because they are super wondrous and creative and the universes always start being new fresh and.. well interesting.. until one way or another descending to something kind of distressing familiar moral landscaping/layout mentioned above.. and characters are so nice and witty (at first) and then.. they turn.. (..girlish/spoiled, dumb and bold).. they actually have some very (not surprising any more.. considering others of your writings) noticeable personality change..like 180 degrees ( Celsius for some reader).. I don't know but that is not like a development of character is more like inconsistency..
Therefore yes.. the author is the God.. and the creator has its unique rights.. unchallenged by the unworthy little reader.. so the Whys remain rhetoric questions..
.. you also include a philosophic anchor.. sufferance is a school.. and emotional turmoil bears fruits..
all in all nice and thank you for the story!
..I like your stories because they are super wondrous and creative and the universes always start being new fresh and.. well interesting.. until one way or another descending to something kind of distressing familiar moral landscaping/layout mentioned above.. and characters are so nice and witty (at first) and then.. they turn.. (..girlish/spoiled, dumb and bold).. they actually have some very (not surprising any more.. considering others of your writings) noticeable personality change..like 180 degrees ( Celsius for some reader).. I don't know but that is not like a development of character is more like inconsistency..
Therefore yes.. the author is the God.. and the creator has its unique rights.. unchallenged by the unworthy little reader.. so the Whys remain rhetoric questions..
.. you also include a philosophic anchor.. sufferance is a school.. and emotional turmoil bears fruits..
all in all nice and thank you for the story!
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July 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, sorry,.. I made a serious mistake.. maybe because it is late now.. there is this guy Overlordpotatoe that has something similar to your writing and was about to award him credits for salaciousness as well..
so it is not "you did it again" but "someone did it again".. and I don't know much about your other characters if they turn mushy or if they top after being on the bottom side.. maybe i'll find out.. here I felt your character rather keeps consistent..
.. but you definitely know now extra about my other reading preferences :)
so it is not "you did it again" but "someone did it again".. and I don't know much about your other characters if they turn mushy or if they top after being on the bottom side.. maybe i'll find out.. here I felt your character rather keeps consistent..
.. but you definitely know now extra about my other reading preferences :)
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July 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The greatest story I have ever had the fortune to read!! I only wish there was more of it!!
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November 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
What a beautiful stories; and i enjoyed your other works tremendously! I hope to see more of your works soon; as well as an update to your incomplete stories!! ;P
Your stories are all on my "To Read AGAIN" list! ;P
Your stories are all on my "To Read AGAIN" list! ;P
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March 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story yet again. You should really write for the series in the syfy channel :D
I was so sure Trent would have ended up with that Sillard from the Southern House (the name escapes me right now)
I love you used more supernatural abilities rather than advance technologies for the fight scenes. I am watching Star Trek Voyager again (thanks to reading Surrender) and I'm getting sick of phasers lol
I read this one along with Survival and I can't help but comment on how similarly they ended with the whole "I love you" and "I Know" bit haha, so sweet
I was so sure Trent would have ended up with that Sillard from the Southern House (the name escapes me right now)
I love you used more supernatural abilities rather than advance technologies for the fight scenes. I am watching Star Trek Voyager again (thanks to reading Surrender) and I'm getting sick of phasers lol
I read this one along with Survival and I can't help but comment on how similarly they ended with the whole "I love you" and "I Know" bit haha, so sweet