rate_review Reviews

Awesome start. Please don't tell me you stopped writing. I need to know how this story goes on, please!!!!!!!!!!! Update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

My god the bath tub scene was hot! What a way for Adam to meet his new owner eh? I can't wait to find out more about the master and to see what slutty adventures await Adam.

Story is a little confusing to read because it seems like you accidentally have written Rob when you have might meant Adam.

The beginning is promising, but you have to pay more attention to dialogues, because you create some confusion switching Adam with Rob and vice versa. Leaving that behind, you must write some more, but I must say to you, it's very interesting, using the twist of history that enable you to use slavery in modern times (well, in future, actually!!!) linked with a totalitarian regime as sultans one. You have a fecund imagination and strong writing skills and I like your work (especially Unexpected - by the way, please, continue to update, it's a pity to lose such a good plot and characters).