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by projectamy

person Somnium
schedule August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Such a fast update! But Mason still doesn't understand! The big lug! Though certainly Casey could work on his communication skills. I really need these people to get together and just love each other without all the confusing mix ups. (nudge nudge, wink wink) Can't wait for the next chappie! And keep up the excellent, awesome work!
person fluffiebunny
schedule August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Man i have to check up on this site more often!!!
I could have missed 2 updates!!!!
And what's more Casey finally puts Eugene in his place and Mason and Casey finally mate!!! >///w///<
Although with this whole Jessica thing im curious to see how the rest of the pack reacts and with Shelby reaction if she ever comes to.
I can't wait to see how things turn out, I hope Casey ends up ok!!!
schedule August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this just broke my heart. poor maison i can;t even begin to imagine how he feels. :(
person Scottishgirl
schedule August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nooooo! Oh how cruel to leave us hanging there like that. Casey is finally getting a clue that it's Mason he wants and needs. Oh, please, please Mason be safe. I know that you think he wants Shelby and that you are almost resigned to give up but Casey needs you - you are stronger than this - don't give up and please keep safe!

Jess has so let the pack down. Mason will have taken a huge kick with the knowledge of her betrayal.... Poor Mase, I just really feel for him right now. Please let me know he's ok and put me out of my misery soon. Pretty please? *throws cookies* :)
person Avih
schedule August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is really keeping me at the edge of my seat. :) please update soon. Love your writing.
person eatmorefish
schedule August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
arghhhhhh!!!! My head is about to explooodeee....this story is like crack!!!

K, so now that's out of my system--great, awesome, intense two chapters--thanks so much...and I'm left freaking craving for more as usual....but this time I'm totally scared for Mason's safety and what a freaking cliffhanger! Oh and the part where Mason basically confesses and Casey is about to reply but is cut short by the freaking smoke was such a kinda-cliffie toooooo!!! zomg I know you will probably update in a while but waiting is sooooo hard. Thanks again, this story is SUPER! :D
person Anon
schedule August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is the BEST.

That is all.
schedule August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
TWO UPDATES!! you're my new person! Poor Mason, I hope Casey figures things out soon!
person Andrea
schedule August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. Like really, really good. Please finish it! I absolutely love this story. It's incredible and clever and original. I commend you for it. So, please-please-please finish it!
person Chibko
schedule August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Geez Casey. The things that Mason is willing to do for you even though he doesn't think you care for him. Obviously if they survive, they'll have lots to discuss.