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for Pack Dynamics

by projectamy

schedule August 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I actually screamed "FUCK YES!" out loud when I noticed that you'd updated with 2 chapters, and two great chapters at that. Is it bad that I've been hoping Shelby was dead through the whole 2 chapters? She annoys meeeee. Can't wait for more updates, hope we don't have to wait as long as we did for these! :)
person B
schedule August 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love you. Your story is great. But that is a damn stressing cliffhanger.
Anyway, I love that Mason finally confessed. And I feel very bad for him, but I know you'll make a fine ending.
person fueledbypho
schedule August 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Noooooooo, fuck Jessica! Fuck the fire! if Mason dies, I'll....I'll sob like a big baby! T_T I am emotionally attached to your characters now! You've done a fantastic job with this story, and you're the queen of lovely and painful cliffhangers. Haha please update as soon as you can. I think you've spoiled me with 2 fastly updated and intense chapters.
person cryptic0ne
schedule August 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You. Are. The. Best.
person Somnium
schedule August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really hope Casey finally accepts Mason and they get more cuddles and less angry yelling. I like the cuddles!
schedule August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story:)
Can´t wait to read the next chapter- they did it- they did it XD
Its a promise for new problems and developments...can´t wait for more XDDD
Thank you for updating, its a gorgeous story^^
Best wishes
Chi
person hitachiintwinlover
schedule August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
EXCELLENT update!! Your chapters are a very good length! Keeps me reading!! And I love the battle of emotions that they both have with their inner animals!! Especially Casey and his unconscious submissiveness to Mason!! It's unfortunate that their first time was with Mason in a drug induced haze, but it wasn't unwilling on either part, WHICH = hot! Thanks again and can't wait for more!!
schedule August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
the 'dying' scene almost made me cry.
will the misunderstanding be cleared in the next chapter? I don't want to see Mason drive Casey away, not now that the jeopard finally discovered his attachment/feelings towards his Alpha.
person Roya7777
schedule August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God!!!! O.O another update?! xoxo I love you! I love you ...

and oh ... my ... what a chapter!!! Mason's feelings, Casey's understanding ... wow ... I hope Mason would be fine ...

But the misunderstanding! Mason thinks Casey is caring about Shelby all along! not him!!! ohhh ... Is Mason the one who is going to get disappeared this time? :(

wow, I wanna read more ... T.T this is your worst cliff hanger!!! please update sooner this time ... like tomorrow would be tooo late! lol I know I know, thanks anyway, Monday morning starting with this, will make the whole day ^_^
schedule August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
damn. angst. *sigh*