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by projectamy

person Lala
schedule August 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! I don't think I've ever commented, and I'm really sorry about that. I just wanted to let you know the story was great and it kept me interested from one chapter to the next. Congratulations on finishing your first fiction (not many can do it). I hope you continue writing the same great-quality stuff!
person B
schedule August 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
A fitting ending to a great story. I really liked Mason's and Casey's relationship with each other, and their characters. I also appreciate how you made a great female character for Casey to fall for, and you didn't have to bash her just for being a girl.

But what I do find lacking - what happened to Casey's parents that made him turn to Shelby? That has been bugging me mind since Chapter two.
schedule August 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Why?! The end came so soon!
You're excellent. I guess I have not right to grumble.
XoXo
person Somnium
schedule August 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this was such a sweet ending. I'm happy they finally talked and said what they really meant to each other! I likes this couple. You created a good balance between angst and love. Hope to see more from you in the future!
schedule August 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh amazing!! Heck ya i wanna see more!! I love these two!!!
person Darkladyknight
schedule August 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am contacting you about the ending to this story, I would like you to contact me asap. I have questions about it, and I am sure you know what I am talking about.

Darkladyknight
schedule August 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was so happy when I saw that you did not abandon this story. It was perfect. I wouldn't mind seeing more stories with Mason and Casey. Thanks for the great read!!!
schedule August 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I CANT BELIEVE THAT I NEVER FOUND THIS STORY!! Magic and beauty and love! I LOVE LOVE LOVE IT, and you
the magical and beautiful author. It's actually perfect, the characters, writing, plot.... ah. PLEASE UPDATE.
Okay, I'm done :) XoXO
person Mint
schedule August 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm kinda sad this is over! This was a cute story, and it was only 10 chapters!

Awesome job, and I hope/encourage you to write more 4 us!!
person js
schedule August 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great story!