rate_review Reviews

YESSSSSSSSS! Absolute perfection. This story was such a joy to read! I am so happy you finished it, and it's your first finished story too?! That just makes it even better! I wish it hadn't ended so soon though. It doesn't seem like enough, but it'll probably never be enough for me haha. I would like to see more about the betrayers and what about other groups that were affected by the drug that Lavoie (sp?) used. Also it'd be cool to see the rest of the Mason's packs' reactions to Casey and his relationship. Although, they probably saw it coming a mile away haha. Anyway a great read! Thank you for sharing it with us.

YAY CONGRATS!!!! I loved every second of this! I hope to see Mason And Casey again!!! OOo OO I say sequel for the other pack memebers! but i understand if it won't happen only in my dreams men are all gay and sexing each other XD...that just made me sound like a huge pervert...

I was actually surprised that the story ended. I felt that there were still a lot of unresolved issues between Mason and Casey and I thought that you would resolve the issues before the end of the story.

The issue of Casey just leaving and never telling Mason the truth of why he left the pack. If Casey felt that strongly about his parents' past, enough for him to want to leave the pack, how could he just as easily come back in and rejoin the pack knowing who the pack took their orders from and knowing how they felt about other shifters? Didn't he spend two years kind of like fighting against the pack's leaders?

It just feels like you didn't want to write the story anymore and you just ended the story quickly. I'm not saying it to be mean or anything like that. That's just how it feels like for me but, then again, this is your story and it's up to you to end it whenever you want it to end. At least you ended the story and didn't leave readers wondering.

Lovely :)
Yes it does feel a little rushed, but no one ever wants a beautiful thing to end.
I really really hope you'll write more stories! xxx

I would love an Epilogue and deleted scenes. Maybe a Mase and Case shower scene. I love the story though and I i'll be reading it several times over.

Thank you so much for finishing this story (and for the quicker updates towards the end)!! However, I agree that there seemed to be some issues left unresolved, especially concerning the Wolf council and the Betrayer group. It would be awesome if you wrote some 'deleted scenes' or even better an epilogue in which some of these things were resolved or explained.

I would also love to see a meeting between Mason and Shelby and how they both react to each other (and poor Casey's reaction as well). After all, Mason is Casey's mate and Shelby is like Casey's sister and best friend rolled into one (with whom he also used to be 'friends with benefits'). I personally would also like to see how Lavoie (sp?) is/was dealt with. What does Mason do with/about him? Does he just turn him over to the Wolf council or does he handle it personally?

Someone else mentioned wanting a scene where they went back to the pet shop and Mason bought Casey the collar he eyed before. I agree that would make an interesting scene and would be a way to further show more of their relationship and interaction. It has the potention for Mason to show more of not only his dominance (which he has admittedly shown a lot of already) as well as his tender side towards Casey. I could be a way for Casey to understand that there is some equality in their relationship (they're both equally vulnerable towards each other).

Well, just some thoughts from an enthusiastic fan. These were just some suggestions, if you happen to feel like writing more about Casey and Mason (Have I mentioned that an epilogue would be AMAZING?). But, please don't feel pressured to do so. This was a great story (loved the characters), and I thank you once again for finding time to finish it for us, all your readers.

Hfruieoe wwowooww I. Really liked this. Yeah. Yeah. Um. I want to see more of their life, tbh. And the pack. And shelby. Everyone! The betrayers, the alliance. Fhruei more pls. Great ending. More.

I love this story, really.
But I think you endet it without ending something Important.

I would have loved to see the betrayer not callede betrayer anymore... that most shifters come to their senses and accept that Humans are just as good... you endet this with a lot of questions left for us... I want them answerd q,q
Maybe a little oneshot where we See Shelby takinf total control of Eugen or Nora?xD

That was great ! Really, thank you for finishing and sharing this with us !
It's a little sad when a story stop...
Casey made the right choice ^^
A sequel or some one shot would be fantastic...

I'm sorry this is the final chapter: I loved the story. I actually hoped tor 2/3 more chapters, but I guess this ch. is the perfect 'happy end'.
THANKS THANKS TANKS THANKS THANKS THANKS for completing it. Too many good stories are left half-way.