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by projectamy

person MissMiki
schedule February 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG...so, there I was, listening to Sea Wolf's "You're a Wolf" and clicking through AFF, and here was your story!! :D I like the set up-it's not glamorous, but I'm interested to see where you pick up after this chapter. Will we be pushed forward all the way to the point where Casey has left? and we're left with flashbacks into the past? Or will you give us a few days/weeks leading up to when he decides to leave, and then thrust us further forward to when he is trying to come back?? o.o so many amazing and awesome options!! I can't wait to see what you'll do. Update soon?? ^^;
person Anon
schedule February 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start. I will definitely keep reading so give me more soon.
schedule February 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I must say that this story appeals to me. I can’t wait to read the next chapter. Do you have a fictionpress.com account? I would be much easier to keep track of the story, when you update I would automatically get an email!
schedule February 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, this first chapter is great! I'm very very interested in reading more!!
person Tripliss
schedule February 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
another chapter!!! very exciting! And so long too! Can't wait for the next one! (please let it come out soon) :D
person Diza
schedule February 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I know you just updated but is it so pathetic that I desperately need another fix?! I'm so intruged by Casey and Mason and I absolutely adore the dynamics of their relationship. I really hope you're alWays this fast at updating! I was really surprised when I saw it had already been updated. Well, I really love it and can't wait for more.
person oo
schedule February 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ok, let me give a better review.
i love the characters. that little girl, aw, bet shes the 'little sister'! and theres always a party pooper in a group:eguene, the grump. and the big blonde boy, i wonder if hes like 'the friendly giant', a big teddy bear in disguise. and the other girl, totall wise-ass. and mason, the big over protective brother. IN OTHER WORDS, A COMPLETE FAMILY. *tears aawwww
lol.
i like casey and mason very much, caseys messed up foster history and winding up in juvie where he meets mason. i loved how they meet for the first time. so cute, mason all like turning into a kid with a toy who doesnt want to share, lol, i know, he was just being protective. yes, he'll make an awesome 'alpha'.
im hooked on anita blake, have you read laurell k hamilton? anyways, i like reading about shapeshifters and all that. i think they call it a 'pard' for cats.
oh yea, i totally caught onto something, a 'shapershifter alliance'?? what is that? like a council for supernatural people?
so hes the only one in a group of wolves. boy, thats going to be weird once he starts shifting.
oh, will he shift once he hits puberty? i bet thats when it will happen.... bet itll be painful too...
if there is a 'council' for shifters, then why havent they recieved help from them? hmmm...
dude, i cant wait to read more.
person oo
schedule February 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yea, so, GREAT first chapter.
and really really nice summary, its what hooked me in.
i wonder if therell be some more chapters of casey at 12, or will there be a time skip?
cant wait to read to find out why casey quits the pack(maybe because of the different animal shifting personalities, cat and dog dont get along?). obviously from the summary when case leaves it really hurt mason. and whose the friend that casey has to join the pack back for to help?
im just really looking forward to more of the story. update quickly. ill totally be checking for updates by the way.
person Ma_Belle_Nuit
schedule February 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is rlly greay start!! And it's something ive never read before!! Im already loving Casey tehehe. Cant wait to read more :D
person Ovelkara
schedule February 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
love the beginning of this story cant wait to see what happens next ^_^ update soon