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Mason is scary! but I love it. haha I wonder how Casey is going to manage convincing the to help free a betrayer, and how they would react if they knew he had been helping them this whole time! Oh lord, I feel bad for Casey haha. Please update soon! >_>

I loved it so far, only downfall is that there isn't more of it! But that can easily be resolved. Right? Hint-hint...but seriously. Awesome premise.

Interesting start, I like how your writing it, seems like you're having a howling good time LOL. But a Jag Cat shouldn't be a submissive to a wolf they're not in the same league full grown. But I still can't wait to read more, even if I am not into the usual bloody shifter smut. You story has a different feel to it! And something tells this lonely lost Kitty will not make a good pet for the big black wolf! G

I kinda like it. Only, there are some spelling mistakes scattered throughout the chapter.

What I think is important, is to factor into the story and especially characters interactions the habits which are natural for the respective species. Jaguars being loners with stable territories, only interacting with other Jaguars for reproduction. Wolfs on the other side very social, living in packs, with a strict hierarchy who hunt together. The conflicts which would ensue due to the different living habits would give the story sure some spice and welcoming drama *wriggles eyebrows*. I can't imagine Casey being able to easily accept a subordinate role to Mason, because it's just not in his animal nature. Maybe thats also part of the reason why he will later leave the pack? *deliberates* But I'm getting ahead of myself.

Please continue. I'm waiting to see what happens :)

omg! i love the beginning!

Eugene really is a lil shit :P haha.

And you should update as soon as possible because i cant wait to read further. xD

really interested in this story!! can't wait to see why he left. well, jaguars are solitary animals. Mason Rossi is a hot name btw ;) update soon<3

Loving it! Feels original, inventive and fun! Please continue!

Wow thats got to be one of the best written prologues ive read in years. I cant wait to see how perfect the story will be one it really gets rolling :D

whoa. I already like how this is turning out. casey's personality is really interesting, especially in his interactions with mason. I'm really excited to see how this turns out and why he leaves. thanksss and I'm definitely looking out for the next chapter!!

Woah! Very interesting! Looking forward to more!!!