rate_review Reviews

Ha-Ha “And if you say something like ‘back to bed’ or ‘up my ass’, I will kick your ass.”

and then again and again anad soem aGAIN.
Lots's of sex, nicely wrapped up,bit too much physical more then animal like.
But all in all, congrats on the wrap.
I enjoyed it very much.
See you on your new story.

Oh, God ! That was great ! Hot ! And now with this last chapter the story feels complete...
I will miss the pack and its members ! :)
I'm looking forward reading you again... Maybe you'll come back with a new story, a sequel or an old story ?
Like "A fair exchange" ? Yes, yes, I know I'm a nuisance with my little obsession ! ^^'
Anyway, thanks for sharing...

I'm glad you added this last chapter. It feels more finished ending with the proper collar and the explanation why casey left. Are you planning on making a series? If so I will continue to read.

Yay! Glad this story is now complete! Please write more; You're talented!
Had fun reading your stuff! xD

I totally love this story! I'm glad you added the last chapter. Now it's more complete. I'll keep an eye out for any future stories you post. You're a great writer!!!

Great story, I loved it. Poor Mason got his heart put through the wringer so many times. I was surprised that Casey could just completely abandon his family after they took him in at age 12, even if they worked for the Alliance. I am glad they worked things out in the end.

D'awww~~ Thank you for writing the follow-up. :D It very neatly tied all the loose-ends. :3

Hi I enjoyed your story.

What a great story - I thoroughly enjoyed it! You had me a little afraid until the very end with all the misunderstandings between Casey and Mason, but I'm so glad that they finally got together! I don't know how Mason will react when Casey wants to visit Shelby in Montreal, though... But at least both Mason and Casey seem to have kept their personality despite the change in their relationship. :)
I wonder, though: what happened to Lavoie's pack (did they all die in the fire?), and what will happen with the Alliance, after Mason's pack helped a Betrayer? Will Casey even be able to still work for the Alliance after he became a Betrayer for 2 years?
Anyway, if you ever decide to write an epilogue or some deleted scenes, I'll very much look forward to it! And thank you for sharing your story with us!

My advice...Take the story down and get it published! With a few grammar corrections, I think that you could absolutely get this story published. :) Its now the same old, angsty crap that I see published time and again, I VERY mush enjoyed Pack Dynamics.