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by projectamy

person Baku
schedule February 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Mason is wonderful. Psychotic, yet so wonderful. I feel so bad for him, though. Casey is awfully clueless.

And the name Vladislav made me giggle. It was so out of no where, but in a good way.

Well, so. Shelby. Hope you're alright and all. It's nice you made them a couple, even if it would be problematic in the future. Keep it up :)
person fluffiebunny
schedule February 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love the new chapter! Can't wait to see how the rest of the pack reacts to Casey's return!
person Anon
schedule February 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
damn this is sooo goood!! I wonder what's going to happen when Mason finds out Casey's real reason....not gonna be pretty XD!! Thank you for the fast updates!! Butttt....I'm left with wanting more and pleading for an update! Ahhh I know I shouldn't but please update quickly? *hides in embarrassment for shamelessly asking*
fantastic story! really keeps one guessing....:)
person mw0627
schedule February 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor Mason...I do not blame him, Casey is naughty for taking off.
person MissMiki
schedule February 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hahah thanks for the clarification! also, i can't tell if I want Mason to be with Casey, or with Shelby!!! dilemma ^^; also, I wonder if Casey isn't coming clean about the situation because he's sworn to secrecy? or does he really think Mason is devoted to the Alliance? So far I know that Mason's Pack is working for the Alliance, but that doesn't always mean "loyal" so i'm anxious to see Mason's feelings on the matter and if Casey will come clean.
schedule February 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Haha...I came back 12 hours later and there was an update. ^^ Ahhhh! Best gift ever...
I kinda understand why Mason overrated in the last part since he thought Casey left again. Mason loves Casey to the point of obsession that it was hard for him to understand why Casey left; it's betrayal to him. Casey is just too stubborn to realize that he's in love with Mason too.

P.S: I'm definitely obsessed with this story now.... *waves fan flag*
person oo
schedule February 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh man. another quick update. youre awesome.
dude, casey is worried, probably scared about whats happening to shelby, he definitely doesnt need masons abuse on top of everything.
i understand why he hasnt asked mason for help yet, mason would probably call him a 'betrayer'.
argh... but ya know, caseys parents were killed by the 'alliance' and i wonder if masons family was killed by the 'alliance' too and just using hunters to blame so no one finds out just how corrupt the 'alliance' really is.
person Fallout-Angel
schedule February 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* the verbal abuse will worse. I know he's scared of loosing Casey... but really honey over vinegar always. well.....it's just going to get rougher ....the other will probably treat him like crap....*pout* i really hate mason.
person yukilover
schedule February 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!! I never review stories but i had to reivew this one cuz i just love it. I love you fast upades and i hope the next chapter is up tonight or tommarow^.^
person Althydia
schedule February 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What is Casey's plan exactly? If he needs the pack's help to find Shelby, he'll have to tell them soon... Right? Does he really think he can bluff his way through this? Because something tells me that if Mason finds out the truth, he'll be really pissed off... Plus, does Casey want to leave the pack again once he has Shelby? Once again, that wouldn't go over very well with Mason... And it's not very considerate either, when it's obvious the Alpha cared for and was worried sick about him.
There's something I don't get too: why didn't Mason smell Shelby in the park when he went to retrieve Casey 2 years ago? How come wolves couldn't at least smell another cat shifter, if not a female? Particularly because dogs have an even better sense of smell than cats. And how come Mason, who seems very possessive of Casey, can't smell Shelby on him now? I kind of expected a jealous fit from him...
Casey's feelings for Mason seem ambiguous because even if he didn't like the fact he was not Alpha and had to submit to Mason, his cat side seemed to have accepted his position rather well and actually rejoiced in it... I wonder when their relationship will become more sexual. And what of Shelby? I'd love for Casey and Mason to admit their feelings and stay together... I did read the story expecting M/M after all. :) Plus, Casey and Mason's relationship is more fascinating and complex, and Shelby seems a tad too perfect...
Now, what will the rest of the pack think of Casey's return? Will someone find it suspicious? Eugene could also really enjoy the fact that Casey's now omega...
Your story is very intriguing and thrilling. Thanks for the fast updates!