rate_review Reviews

Omnom! I can't wait for an update ;)

I like this story and I hope to read more.

One thing down in chapter one did you mean stretch or stench when Mason was talking to Casey in juvie?

Nice read! I hope there's more chapters though....

woah! was it just me or did you edit some things out of this chapter?? I wanted to re-read the incredibly sexy part where Casey turns submissive, but weren't there some lines where Mason is helping Casey into the bedroom, and he tells him how sexy he is like that? Or are you trying to hold back on how much Mason likes him?? :) i kinda miss that moment, but I understand if it implies stuff about their relationship that hasn't quite happened yet. Also, i had read the section 1 of 2 ways before which was that 1) Mason's molested his kitty before when he was like that or 2) the two of them have done stuff together before. But with the way you edited (if you did, i could have imagined this haha) now I just think there is a lot of sexual tension, with no one having acted on it.

I "Dawww"-ed out loud at the ending of the second chapter. It was adorable.
You have likable characters, and I find this story to have something unique within it. I like it. Hoping Shelly won't get killed! She's nice.

Thanks for another update! I'm so excited about this story and always wanting to read more!

I can't wait for Casey's reaction when he finds out about the way Mason acts around him and to him!

Wonderful story!

I love this story and your writing so much. Misunderstandings! Obsession!!!

Mason is such a fun character: likable, but not. Brutal and tough, but easily hurt by Casey. The scenes when he was thinking he scented Casey and when he thought he had left again were so sad. But the sadistic side of me loved how Casey just completely rubs rejection in his face with his comments about why he left and why he came back.

I like Shelby too, although I know they're not "meant to be" as a couple. It's nice to not see the usual "look at this awful female standing in the way of our boys getting together" you see in slash fics.

Hmm, good chapter! I think it's cute that Mason has apparently pined away the last two years missing Casey but I'm starting to get a strong dislike for him. He's treated Casey like a pet and purposely and publically humiliated him to show his dominance (the coffee scene) which he hasn't seemed to do with the rest of the pack and was surprised when Casey left? Chapter 3 shows an abusive Mason and it will be heartwrenching for him to destroy any warm feelings between the two.

I like it :D please update soon! And love Mason's dominant behviour :P keep it going!!!

Two chapters in one day?! My lucky day :D I love how the story is progressing, can't wait for the next installment