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February 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I forgot to mention this before:
OMFG?! You wrote 'A Fair Exchange'?! (English) Words cannot express my love for that story, or the depth of my sorrow now that I realise I may never see it again. ;__;
Please update 'Pack Dynamics' soon!
OMFG?! You wrote 'A Fair Exchange'?! (English) Words cannot express my love for that story, or the depth of my sorrow now that I realise I may never see it again. ;__;
Please update 'Pack Dynamics' soon!
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February 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aaahhhh this story is amazing!!! I really like how things are going. The power struggle is delicious, as is the fact the Casey is so oblivious.
On a side note I really loved your story a fair exchange. Is there any chance of it being continued?
On a side note I really loved your story a fair exchange. Is there any chance of it being continued?
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February 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh no, a cliffhanger! I am officially in love this story and it's only been two chapters!
Putting that aside, I really like the relationship dynamics between Mason and Casey, and I'm curious to know whats going to happen with them in the future (maybe I like the fact that Mason is so possessive already, and that Casey is so resistant to it, haha). The wider background plot you've introduced as of chapter 2 has piqued my interest as well, looking forward to see how that pans out.
Anyway, I also noticed that in chapter 2 you said you were looking for someone to go over you're story in terms of grammar and spelling, although going over you're chapters you might be better at it than I am, haha. If you havent recieved an offer yet would love to Beta you're story (it's not a totally unselfish offer on my part, lol). My forum name is Evertide if you're interested. : ) .
Putting that aside, I really like the relationship dynamics between Mason and Casey, and I'm curious to know whats going to happen with them in the future (maybe I like the fact that Mason is so possessive already, and that Casey is so resistant to it, haha). The wider background plot you've introduced as of chapter 2 has piqued my interest as well, looking forward to see how that pans out.
Anyway, I also noticed that in chapter 2 you said you were looking for someone to go over you're story in terms of grammar and spelling, although going over you're chapters you might be better at it than I am, haha. If you havent recieved an offer yet would love to Beta you're story (it's not a totally unselfish offer on my part, lol). My forum name is Evertide if you're interested. : ) .
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February 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
"Casey fumbled with them, still hazy. He pulled the white joggers off and then pulled on boxers and yellow sweatpants and a black wife beater."
All I could think was black and yellow black and yellow
Go Pittsburgh Steelers!
But back on topic, loved the first chapter and oh my goodness, the length! I love it! You are a really good writer and I can't wait for more chapters
All I could think was black and yellow black and yellow
Go Pittsburgh Steelers!
But back on topic, loved the first chapter and oh my goodness, the length! I love it! You are a really good writer and I can't wait for more chapters
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February 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aww, seems like Mason missed his chance with Casey, and now he's found someone else... Very interesting and exciting story - I love shape-shifters too!
By the way, are there going to be a lot of het scenes in your story? If so, you might want to add it in the warnings, because it could be a bit confusing. :)
Can't wait for the next chapter! Will it be fast-forward to 2 years later?
By the way, are there going to be a lot of het scenes in your story? If so, you might want to add it in the warnings, because it could be a bit confusing. :)
Can't wait for the next chapter! Will it be fast-forward to 2 years later?
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February 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter really gets one sucked in. Great Job!
BTW is "Pack Dynamics" Casey's catchphrase?
BTW is "Pack Dynamics" Casey's catchphrase?
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February 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm not a fan of m/m or f/f... But I like where you're going with this!
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February 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is just too good to stop. -_-; I literally groaned in protest when it was ending. Lolz Your story is amazing and I didn't even notice the grammar (if there's even any). Please update again, you're awesome! ^^
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February 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG! You shot Casey! Although its not a serious injury. I liked Mason's inner monologue, especially finding out that Casey's his mate (I highly doubt Casey will like that at all.) I have to wonder what Mason is going to do to Casey when he finds out Casey's considering joining the other side. I also have to say that I love the length of your chapters. Its awe inspiring.
Update soon please!!
Update soon please!!
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February 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! All I can say is that I can't stop thinking about it and I really hope you stick with it. Great job!