rate_review Reviews

Like Casey.
Really REALLY dislike mason.
Don't trust Shelby.
I wonder why Casey stay so long.....i really hope mason stops being a complete jerk.
I wonder if they're a better option than mason.....but then i remember the summary and I pout. Well i really hope that mason becomes a decent....wolf-shifter.

Very interesting, i can't wait to see what happens next!!!

YAY! Another chapter! I was so engrossed from beginning to end! And poor Casey.....I wonder if Mason knew anything about the Alliance's dealings with the jaguars? Can't wait to read more!

sweet! fast update! nice.
lol. dude, theyre still sharing a bed together? and theyre still poor! that sucks...
wait! bahahahah! a cat bed!?
bahahah. i would be sooo mad.
aahh, casey only feels safe and secure around mason, although, i dont like that casey can no longer hold eye contact with mason. i wonder why...
aahhh! 'exc' except me! muah, mason is so totally in love. wow. and casey has no idea!
woah! that submissive stuff, its like a switch being flipped. complete different personality.
dude. why cant other shifters have the same rights? and humans are killed if they find out? thats cold. thats insane.
OH MY GOODNESS! I WASNT EXPECTING THAT. shelbys entrance and her story, just amazing. oh man, this totally changes everything!
cant wait to read more.

i can totally see it coming, best friends becoming enemies. that will be a sad day... which will be the next chapter! cant wait to read the blow out.

Oh bloody wow! That last sentance in chapter two slayed me. Loved it, loved it, loved it. When's the next update?! :D

OMG...so good. thank you for the quick update!!! :D While I feel bad for Mason, I also feel bad for Casey. Plus it's hard to really understand either of them in the context of being these "shifters" and having animal tendencies. Because if Mason was just a man, I'd hate him. And if Casey was just a human, I'd think he's a victim. In some ways the latter is still true, but if Mason and the shifters are made to be dominate or submissive (as many animals are), then he's not necessarily being the "abusive" boyfriend?? maybe? arg...either way. i love this story so far. :)

Two chapter and wow! It reads fast, pulling you along but leaves you demanding more. i love it. Love the depth of each of the characters, the inner struggle of Casey. The world you created feels real. As a Canadian girl i Love that you put in Ontario. Thank you So much for Sharing this tasty story with us. I can't wait for more.

SO good! I saw how long this chapter was when I started reading and I was like YES...but at the end I still got that feeling where I felt I'd sped through it and just wanted more! anyway it was really interesting to see how casey and mason's relationship has developed. I wander what mason's thinking: does he want a relationship with mason? or just a submissive beta? and I liked casey and shelby too! Hot-brunette-and-curvy made me laugh. anyway can't wait to read more, thank you!

Hi! A prologue and one chapter in and I'm already loving your story :D
I'm actually loving it so much that I'm willing to help out with grammar, since you're asking. Nobody else appears to have offered yet, but if you don't want me to, no worries ^^ We also appear to both use English/ Canadian (?)/ Australian English, which is a bonus.
Drop me an email if you're interested and I'll get back to you ASAP.