rate_review Reviews

absolutely love your story...
You got some wonderful style of writing, gorgeous well developed characters and a lot of tension XD
Love their relationship... but I fear the moment Mason learns his true intentions...
Can´t wait for next chapters...
Please keep writing,
*puppydogeyes*
:)
Best wishes
Chichi

I'm loving this story.

But I don't like Selby, I don't know why because she's not actually there but the moment she was mentioned and when Casey left with her, I instantly took a dislike to her and it gets stronger with every chapter.

I love Mason though, I just wish he wasn't so forgiving with Casey and I wish Casey would leave or tell Mason the truth.

Can't wait for more! xx

Although I like your story, it sounds to me as if you really don't understand cat instincts that much. A cat shows submissiveness in a totally different way than dogs. You probably should have made Casey a wolf too because you are describing him too much like a wolf. And since Casey is a jaguar he should more so be fighting his instincts to be alone than to submit. I just don't think the relationship between Mason and Casey is believable. The only reason why a solitary cat submits in a fight for dominance is when their opponent is stronger, larger and more adept at fighting. But I do like your story. I hope I don't offend you. I'm not saying this to be mean. I jut thought I'd give my little two cents and keep reading. Keep up the good work!! =]

LOVE this story SO much.

I'm worried about why they're feeling queasy. I hope they didn't get infected or something at the run (Mason from blood from the puma? Casey from getting bit by Mason?) and turn murderous like these other shifters they heard about. Maybe they're just emotionally exhausted.. they're making themselves miserable by not accepting each other as mates.

Casey really is a skanky omega now, lol. Oh sure, he says he wasn't going to do it with the puma, but he's still skanky.

Just read this for the first time - AND IT'S AMAZING!! Oh God, it's been a while since I've read a story as original as this.
I'm just hoping Casey doesn't have to sleep with that guard to get some answers! Or else Mason's going to y'know, assert his alpha dominance and all. Wouldn't it be fun if Casey released a little of his dominant streak once in a while? ;) Hee hee, update soon!

This story is fantastic, I hope you continue updating regularly because I definitely will be looking forward to every chapter. Let me tell you exactly how much I am looking forward to it. I just read the fourth chapter last night, but because it was so late, I did not have a chance to review it. This is a first for me, but I actually had a dream about your story and I assure you, I am not just saying this. I was completely floored when I woke up this morning and remembered my dream. I just thought I would let you know since the dreams I usually have about stories are from published novels, etc. So long story short, keep up the great work!

I like this story a lot so far and can't wait for you to continue! I want to see what happens if Casey meets up with that puma again >> Probably nothing good :x

This is turning out to be an amazing story! Keep up the awesome work and update soon please

Can't wait for the next chapter. I'm so glad you keep updating, I always have a fear that a good story will just end because the author stops updating.

-_-; Really...? Mason is gonna be so pissed when he found out about Shelby. I mean...Mason gotta come clean about loving Casey cause right now, Casey thinks Mason is acting all dominating for no reason. Actually...now that I think about it, both of them are idiots. Shelby is starting to get on my nerve for no reason...lmao!

P.S: Yay update!!!!