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Aww!!! Thanks so much for writing another chapter.
It would be great if you'd be interested and inspired to write more of this story or a new one, I love your writing style and your plot building.
All the best to you :) x

thank you for the wonderful read!
i have read it in a single sit and loved it!

I was fortunate enough to find this story on its last update. :)
I was sceptical at first, I mean, a shapeshifer underworld? The supernatural often comes out cheesy, in my experience. But I liked it a lot; there are some issues with homophones, and problems like three sentences in a row starting with "Casey [verb]...", but overall your writing is pleasant enough and easy to follow.

I feel, though, that the best thing about your story is the attention you paid to the details of your own set-up. Different animals have different living "arrangements", different ways of interaction. Cats don't tend to mindlessly submit the way dogs do, and so forth. I liked the way your story reflected on that; if you ask me, the effort you put into that paid off.

Don't take this the wrong way, but I think this story deserves to be taken that extra mile and have its mistakes fixed. I know that it's sometimes hard to spot your own mistakes because the brain just substitutes what you MEANT to say, so I'm offering to proofread. If youd like me to give this story a look-over, feel free to email me at attackegg@googlemail.com .

I keep re-reading this in the attempt to make myself believe its NOT over :(
I am so angry in love with you. Its a complicated emotion.
XOXO

WOW, that was great! really, it sums everything up! a very nice ending! I really enjoyed every word of this story ^_^

BTW, thanks for adding the collar subject! lol but it was a surprise that Mason had bought it 2 years ago! lol nicely done.

Now, I am curious: do you have another project in mind?! I will miss your writing! Please tell me you have something else already planned out in your mind or even better on the paper :D well in a computer file :P

Thanks again for the wonderful fic :)

That was a nice chapter! It feels like the end now and the sex scenes were hot! Great finish to a GREAT STORY!!!!

Hey!
I just read the story in one go and I loooooved it! I really hope you will write more stories like that :)
Greetings!

Yay! I'm so happy we got another chapter of Casey and Mason's adventures! Great chapter too, which answered the remaining questions I had about the story. :) Seems like Mason and Casey work really well as a couple, as well as Alpha and Beta to the pack... But poor Casey'd better be prepared and full of stamina with all the times they have sex! Not that I'm complaining, of course. ;)

Awesome ending here! Loved it and the whole plot!

Very much appreciated the aftermath, it was pretty, hot, and tied the whole story up nicely. =)