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by projectamy

person sm
schedule April 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just one question... Will begging speed along updates? Cause, honestly, I’m willing to beg. This story is simply fantastic. I absolutely love it and can’t wait for the next update. So... on to the begging... Please update soon. Please... pretty please.
person MsPersephone
schedule April 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh crap. With Shelby back in the picture wtf is Mason going to do?!
person fluffiebunny
schedule April 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, i wonder why Casey's drink would have more ice in it....XD
Great chapter, i can't wait to read what happens next!
person fudge
schedule April 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yay, a new ch so soon! love this, cannot wait for the next!!!
person lividfire
schedule April 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ha-ha, God I want the next chapter....
person Diza
schedule April 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
O_o Well slap my ass and call me Aunt Sally! Jeez Louise Mason...

You do know I bloody love you, right? Thankyou so much for the speedy updates, which I desperately hope continues!

Today you've given me escape from the whole hoopla of the Royal Wedding. My roomates have taken over and are dressed up, faces painted and glued to the TV. On the plus side, it has given me a day off, so it's all good.

On a bigger plus, I've just read the entire chapter intermittedly, I admit, as I kept having to pause to remember to breathe! It is, after all, one of the biggest turning-points for the story and one nobody could wait for.

Thanks for the amazing update and I hope you're having a nice day.
person amy
schedule April 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
and I can sense the shit about to hit the fan!! ahhh I really wonder how Casey is going to react to being drugged and whether Mason is going to tell him about Shelby's location...wonder how Casey is going to handle it. He's in such a difficult situation because it feels natural to him to submit to Mason but at the same time he gets kind of freaked out by it too, because no one else can make him feel that way. Guess he's gotta decide whether that's a good or bad thing! I liked Nora's observation about how Casey keeps Mason grounded though.

as usual, I'm looking forward to the next chapter!! thanks so much for the quick update!!
schedule April 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
He wouldn't!! I can't believe Mason's gall!!! I hope he realizes that he wants him consensually before it is too late.
person miles
schedule April 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay ! Thanks for the fast update !
Can't wait to know what's Mason going to do ! Did he put the drug in the glasse ?
Update soon please... XD
schedule April 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
U can't stop there!!!! I want moooore!!! :'(