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by projectamy

person MsPersephone
schedule May 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh! What's gonna happen when Mason's turn comes?
person fluffiebunny
schedule May 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, it revealed more what the drug does to shifters when overdosed & now i can't wait to read what'll happen next, especially if Mason's about to get a dose too!
person Scottishgirl
schedule May 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Another delicious update - thank you sooo much! I'm glad to see that Mason didn't spike Casey's drink, it wouldn't have sat well with the character I have built up in my little head so far. Mason is a great, stong and caring Alpha whose priority is to look out for his Pack - he doesn't need to mess around with drugs to do this - just my thoughts anyway :) Having said that though...I'm feeling quite excited about the thought of seeing a little wicked Wolfy side to him in the next chapter (teasing us with this little hint). I know that Mason wouldn't do anything to REALLY hurt Casey - I hope you don't leave us hanging too long - you have been wonderful so far - have I mentioned I love your quick updates :)

*sighs* I do wish that Casey would wake up and smell the coffee although I think he is going to stubborn it out a while longer. Talking of coffee - who would have ACTUALLY spiked this? I have a sneaky little suspicion and I'm not thinking Eugene ;)

I am thinking that, somewhere deep down, Mason is enjoying the opportunity to dominate Casey to this extent - first of all collaring him, marking him in this way with his scent AND then the chain - gives him a little something to think about during alone time ;)

I love this story, please don't stop updating! *skips off to read again*
schedule May 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So sooo good. Enthraling, sweet, bloody hot, it's all in this fic of urs so thank u. Lovin that ur updatin a little more regularly, u make my day when u do.
person amy
schedule May 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Whoa!! this chapter made me really like mason. he was pretty under control when he talked to casey about shelby, except for the part when he realized casey was a betrayer. and the fact that he abstained from drugging casey because he wanted more than just the cat was good too. I wonder where he's heading to now though--the alliance? lavoie? and I wonder who DID put the drug in casey's cream. also I wonder what eugene's deal is...does he like mason? or does he just dislike casey?

Can't wait to read the next chapter!! especially because of the teaser at the end haha
schedule April 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear... Casey's in a whole lot of trouble. I figure Mason put some of that drug in his drink and is either going to do something cruel or something brutal. I can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon please!!
person Kris
schedule April 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oooooo!!! Evil cliffie! :-) did mason put any of that catnip in casey's drink? :-)
Random thought but I would love to see Casey being caught batting at a yarn ball by mason lol
schedule April 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
He drugged Casey's drink didn't he? Can't wait to find out. Great Chapter.
schedule April 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hope to see more Mason/Casey lovin!

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person Mint
schedule April 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG! An update the next day, rt? Didnt u update yeesterday?!!!!!! I hope we, readers are lucky enough to read more new chapters EVERYDAY! But I know its hard to update everyday. Loved this chappie! Hah! SO many of ur reviewers thought Mason drugged him! I thought he would too, kinda, guess. You may want to spend time proofreading, editing, or getting a beta since there were numerous errors in hea. Its still realy good though! Anyway, great job! Update soon plz!