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I really liked this story, I hope you will continue with it one day!

WHERE DO I START? I just found this story three days ago and I've just now caught up to this point and MY GOD I have been over whelmed with every emotion that the human race knows of. This story has touch upon so many things and the way you've woven this story I can think of few others that have moved me so much... I am hoping for a happy ending... I want the poor Tengu in the clutches of that mad man to find his mate and be saved. It sounds kinda sad but I even want the slaver that had the waterlord to find his own escape in a good way even though he's done terrible things.... I think that the other waterlord "lady" is in cahoots with the mad man or she out for herself. I want to meet the young waterlords mate that I'm sure he met in his dream when it told him to come back when he was grown and older. I love the characters and the fantasy of them being who they are and how mixed in both physical and mental fashion that you have made them. I can't wait to read MORE of what your vivid imagination has so show us. THANK YOU FOR SHARING THIS WONDERFUL STORY WITH US! I hope when you are able you will update. Till then read YOU laters!

Oh this story is so amazing!!!!! I totally adore it!!! And I'm so happy I found this!!!! I just love the blooming relationship between Kaien and the tengu!!! I can't tell you how much I love you writing style!!! I hope that you will update soon!!! See you again!!!!

wow Kestrel-sama that we an incredible chapter believe it or not i was in tears. To want , not to need an connection like that the "bond". I thinks is truly one one of throws thing sought after and dreamed of and you hit it in this chapter just wow looking forward to your next chapter.

I'm glad you posted a new chapter! They are so hot together! And aww, the bond!

those two are so cute!!!!!!!! I'm glad the goddess made it so that they were both truly bonded. So beautiful. great job!

Woah! I dont know... I have to collect my thoughts... That was quite a cliffhanger you left me on *shakes finger**. Okay...Just in case you didn't know, I freaking enjoyed your story. I hope to continue enjoying it. This is awesome. Oh, and thank you for blowing my freaking mind.
I am so emotionally connected to all of your characters, even the poor Tengu in the cell, and that guy only appeared like 3 times.Also, your settings are written wonderfully. I'm a visualizer and I was so excited that your words did not disappoint my imagination. Geez Louise! Of course there's always room for improvement but you're a damn good writer! Anyways, I'm just glad I found a wonderful story here. Ah, I almost forgot! *blushes** Uhm, would you accept the cookies I made for you? *presents super-awesome-assortment-of-cookies (no nuts)**

I love this!

hmm i'm getting really interested in Feinrys but omg Raikuro is so cute i want to squeeze him in a bear hug and not let go (goes fan girl) and i'm with Raikuro when Kaien made the poor privet seem like he was going to piss him self rofl (good thing i could lol all i wanted rofl) love you story so much Kestrel-sama at the end of the ch i could only droll thinking winged hottie alert

omg finally the ice is braking <3 i love seeing the different lvl's of emotion and personality they both seem to have when u think u know them boom something new and surprising jumps at ya i love your writing *stalks your page for more *