rate_review Reviews

That's a wonderful story! I don't know if I like him or despise him!
Your characters are really lively and seem to be real ones.
I hope you'll find time to update!

PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!! I need to know what happens next! This is amazing!

This story is really interesting... I hope to see an update sometime

Best story on this site! I am dying to know what happens! Please, please, please, please update! This story is so intense - it's not sappy and sentimental, like so many others. I'm checking every day!

This story is hands-down the best thing I've read on this site. Please update as soon as possible! It's so nice to read something that has real character depth and an edge-of-your-seat plot. I check this site for your work!

wow that was intense. I love it.

like always, I look forward to your next update.

Goodness! I myself used to be quite a popular author here on AFF.net some years ago. I return, not very often mind you, only to sift through the overladen m/m and general trashy writing. And, what's this? I stumble upon this story, and immediately it entrances me. Never once have you broken Annette's character. She is 'virtuous', sullen, and quite a dullard at times, but she feels real in a way that's captivating; flaws and all, she is tangible for the reader. Derrick, a demonic lord is a personification of aristocracy, and here, too, you keep him in line, his character strong and continuous. The writing is lovely, though varied sentence structure would allow for a more fluid read -- also, contemplate breaking up the paragraphs just a little more. Readers' eyes are worn out with the overtly large, bulk paragraphing.

I would certainly say that I love the attention you pay to the central (un)romantic couple; however, it might be beneficial to bring in another. For example, the ball was an excellent demonstration of that. I do find the absolute repulsion, the sheer aggression of the 'elites' toward Annette too forced at times. A student of history as much as the next, it is simply erroneous to think that every single noble she encounters will vehemently despise her. Also, disdain comes in many forms -- try to vary the upper-class a bit more.

I was sorely disappointed to see that this was the last chapter! I do hope you intend to provide me with another quite soon; I'll be bookmarking you, which is more than I could say about any other fiction here. In this next chapter, I hope to see some deviation from Annette's unrelentingly sobbing/hysteric nature, and for her to use her obvious and latent capacities for genuine thought. It would be nice to see her do something --other-- than 'shudder' and feel ill at seeing him. It's simply not realistic at times. I think you're leading up to this, and I intend to fully enjoy the development.

All in all, fantastic work, dear.

WOW...He's jealous maybe he needs to learn tha
difference between force and love..
Sometimes being elite isn't were its at.
Please post more asap....also
Freak of Nature would love to see more to..

WOW ^^ I had waited so long for this chapter to come out! It was well worth the wait! Absolutely wonderful! And I am so glad that we finally can see the lord's more vulnerable side! I can't WAIT to see what happens next!

Please, please update!!!!! I need to know what happens next!