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for A Kiss Of Frost

by artpersonak

person Kat
schedule June 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
ohman derick makes me angry! poor annette! she had better make him work for it! please update when you can i love what you've written and im keen to read more. thank you.
person anne-lee
schedule June 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Annette is such a strong and loveable heroine. I was awe-struck by how determined she was to avoid his advances. Lord Derrick is domineering (oddly appealing). I don't dislike him and I think you've fleshed him out very well (he's twisted, evil-incarnate - love lead males that have such traits). This pairing, although they are opposites - what with Annette easily seen as the 'light' and Derrick the 'dark' - is perfection. Just wanted to shout-out and tell you how I love the characters! The story is great too sopls update.
person amothepirate
schedule June 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This story is excellent!! What a bodice ripper. I love it!
person Dee
schedule June 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for taking the time to update again. I've been checkin' the site and couldn't help the chesire-like grin that spread across my face when seeing the chapter!

I really enjoyed this chapter; the relationship between Herald/Lottie and the final moments when Annette (who I fall deeper and deeper in love with) realises the stark differences b/w the dysfunction of her own interactions with L.D.

I get some sense that she feels 'deprived' of the 'joys' in all of her innocence and dealings with L.D and I hope that she makes L.D mad w/ lust/love for her because of this!!!

O' how I love this heroine!!!! Thanks again. Please, when you can - I know that your chapters are detailed (something I enjoy greatly!) - update.
person Jenn
schedule June 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Aww...what a great update! Now Annette can see what it is like to be in a loving relationship, and hopefully overcome some of her fears.
person Meg
schedule June 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please update! Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease! *pleads*
person Michelle
schedule May 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hey there! I've had the pleasure of following ALL of your stories on AFF! I simply love the roles you cast and the characters; dynamics in A Kiss Of Frost b/w Annette and Derrick are a rare find; to be treasured! I sincerely hope that you'll update when you can. I foresee great things happening for our heroine and can only cross my fingers that Derrick and Annette both sought out their issues w/ one another; the angst/sinister qualities in this story have captured me, completely!!!!! Thanks so much for taking the time to tell such a disturbingly beautiful tale.
person Jenn
schedule May 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great update! I love the way you write, I get so caught up in the story I completely forget about everything else. I hope that when Derrick finds her she keeps fighting him and doesn't give in quickly. Looking forward to more - please, please, please update soon!
schedule May 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! I have been trying SOOO hard to get back into my account on here so I could review this story! I absolutely adore ALL your stories and have read them all over and over again. This latest update to "A Kiss of Frost" did not disappoint! I love the budding friendship between Annette and Lottie. I also adore that she is re-discovering herself and her own freedom. I REALLY look forward to her reunion with Lord Derrick :) I am sure it will be VERY thrilling! If she is keeping his ring, she must have SOME small bit of affection for him...and I know she hates him, but there is SUCH a fine line between hate and love ;)

Please update soon, soon, SOON :D!!!!
person serasvictoria666
schedule May 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
im so happy you updated! i might say this every time but i really do love your story. looking forward to the next chapter.

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