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I don't mean to ruin the story but is Mel the new Mik? Since you said Ayan had shot him in the chest and he done it in a previous life (anieges bloodlines and Aniege killing Mik and causing the end of the world thingie) I'm sorry if someone has already asked this but please Ayato email me at pt0110@hotmail.com to know if I'm right >.<

Hey! Great story...but right now I'm as confused as Mel! 8-\

I adore Ashun's practical sense! And I agree with her, they really get lost in their own debate here, maybe they should listen more to Mel?

okay this last chapter now has me somewhat confused :p

OK where is Ayato and what is Mel in for? About how long will Tanis' fever last? And I was wondering, if Una doesn't walk (he appears) does Durth do it too?

Ayato! Ayato!! tat was a woah! and unexpected drop off a cliff. i can't wait for more!

Great story you got going. Please keep up the great work!
Laters.

Hey^^ thanks for the updates, dear. I hope you will be better soon, I am sorry for the absence, I am sick here too.

I really enjoyed the beginning of this story, but I thought that Lou and Mel's interaction was going to be the main element or plot of the story. I've been a little disappointed in the recent updates because that appears to be less and less significant. I also don't understand a lot of the terminology--such as "mother born"--perhaps that's because I would need to read your other stories first. Anyway, I think that your description of Lou and Mel's relationship is fascinating; I just wish that we were exposed to them on a more frequent basis. Per your summary, I would think that would be more of a focal point to most of the chapters.

Chapter 28. XD I love Ayet! And I believe Ayet is the lover's only child that was raped and tortured and the second son came after Whisper had mate the plumped woman Ayet calls mother. That sentence was out of wack, but you get what I mean. Can't wait to see more of Ayet and if Tanis makes it through his fever. Oh! Oh! I believe Tanis is mother born because Jarg corrected his mistake by taking down the sick pediphile and due to Durth's good blood, concentrated in Tanis.