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February 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh Yuck!
Poor Mel, he really is a magnet for trouble, aren't he?
Poor Mel, he really is a magnet for trouble, aren't he?
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February 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Three chapters in and for some reason the Sidhe involved keeps jabbing me because he wants 'alone time' with the main character.
Helps the Sidhe with poking you....
Oh I love it already^^
More please.
Helps the Sidhe with poking you....
Oh I love it already^^
More please.
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February 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh yah! Im liking this one more and more! Do your best!
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February 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sounds great!! Can't wait for more :-)
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February 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OOOOO chapter 1. XD this reminded me of 1 thing that's been bugging me and i forgot due to work. now it's come back to haunt me so i'mma put it in as a response. this came up after I read Tweak. I assume that the gods were born after that mother made Shin into Ayato, and gifted Ash to Shin thus Ash became Raya. And assuming that Raya was somehow lost after Mother's sleep and the other gods born from mother, decided to play a game and tat was how Raya got picked up and the whole of...... and i seem to be digging a hole here. wonder if any readers are reading my review and wondering, that may be possible.
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February 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2. XD I'm so looking forward to the rest of the story! Especially the way the second chapter ended. I want to know what will happen when they reach the village. i think Mel will be cornered by the sidhe and ravished splendidly. now how will the sidhe go about it is a mystery but we'll find out eventually XD
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February 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm assuming the Sidhe in this story will be similar (exactly?) like the ones in your other stories like Partners, either way, I'm really looking forward to this story and I can't wait to see how it progresses. :)
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February 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
was that behemoth a baby? Sounds like it, lol. I had to laugh at the picture that created inside my head, rofl.
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February 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I like how this is starting out. I'm excited for more chapter. As a side note, in chapter 2 you seem to have the sidhe pronouncing/sounding out the word "sidhe" with the "d." Actually, sidhe has a silent "d" and sounds like "she."
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February 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Still looking great. It makes me wonder if the sidhe has spent to much time harrasted and is not quite right in the head but still knows what it wants. He is acting a bit nutty but just nutty enough that he reminds me of jack sparrow, you can never quite decide if he is crazy, just acting or extremely drunk. :P
I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
I'm looking forward to the next chapter!