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strange story...

This story I think just got a millions times better. I know you said you wouldn't update for a few days but I really wish yOu would. Mel is absolutely adOrable. So please update soon.

Rofl, rofl, rofl!
And now I am very certain that Mel is a trouble magnet^^ XD
So...blue instead of yellow eh? I wonder what else goes wrong all the time the poor boy has encounters with Power...certain spells that suddenly work, lights that have the wrong colours...is thinking.
I am certain you used that kind of word before, will have to look into it, I do not mean Auw...however, my guess is it means something very importand.
And the reaction of the city Whisper is still rubbing me the wrong way too. I always think I missed something^^
Hope you update soon, love how Lou is marking his territory^_^

Very interesting and original, and I like your characters too. I haven't read Wilds Born, though, so should I read it first to have some background or are you going to explain some stuff, like what are Deaths or Whispers?

Hahahahahahahahahaha! Poor Tanis walking in on the two. Probably got a boner of his own seeing all of that and will probably go set himself straight with his women later. Tanis was a bit early but I wouldn't mind seeing Mel and Lou getting it on more. ah, time to go shovel the snow now. Xo thanks for the update! and i hope to see more!

I find this story highly amusing. :D Lou's simpleton-like behavior is so endearing. Reminds me of a dog. XD I was totally gagging when Lou kissed Mel (with tongue) only because Lou was slurping spider paste and eating trapdoor spider legs not too long ago. O_O He needs to learn how to brush his teeth and use mouthwash before he mauls Mel; or just stop eating disgusting stuff.:P

I've read most, if not all, of your works. I just never got around to reviewing, and having a terrible habit of forgetting any and all passwords or user names I develop doesn't help. But anyways, you are a fantastic writer, and I thoroughly enjoy everything you do. Okay, so sometimes I get a little (a lot) confused about who is what and when, but I just go along with it and hope it makes sense in the end. I like to think I am doing pretty well so far with this one, and I look forward to the next chapter! Good luck with work and University.

Yay! Two chapters since last i checker.
This is getting steamy! I really like the sidhe in this. He is really fun to read.

Keep it up!

A while ago I was told the ancient Celtic Sidhe is pronouced like Shee, Unless what you said a new more updated version.

Like your story its very interesting, and I look forward to more! !

Why would you protect a village that treats you horrible? I wouldn't.