rate_review Reviews

wow that is all i gotta say! very well done..could have lived without him peeing on her, but hey you are the writer :D

I was glad that you didn't just dive right into the sex - a little bit of backstory never killed anyone, and the setting was much more interesting than your run-of-the-mill smuttery. I particularly liked the low branch bit - I didn't see that coming, but it added to the story a lot, I think, to have a detail like that in there. It made the scene more than just a "fucking against a tree" bit.

I was wondering however, why his fingers were cold if you mentioned that the cold didn't bother him at all. Yes, it makes for a delicious sensation, I was just curious.