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by silverdragoness21

person Anon
schedule April 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, very nice indeed! I loved Sam's banter with Connor, and how very self-possessed and confident she has become. She may be Jushion's slave, but in her heart, she is a free woman, and strong at that.
person Anon
schedule April 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, lovely! This is wonderful and chilling, and Jushion has no idea of what his little slave truly is. His end, surely enough, if the old woman is right... but young demons are proud and foolish and rarely survive long enough to become old and powerful.
person Onihime1
schedule April 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Weee!! So awesome to see Sam in here! Can't wait for more Sam-Tori goodness! ~huggles the Sam~
person Anon
schedule April 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ah, poor Taess. That's a dreadful way to find out your birthright, and how nice it is that everyone wants to use you for it. Wonderful chapter!
person Anon
schedule April 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ah, Sam's story now! Excellent, and a rousing start to her tale. It's going to be a treat to see how she became the woman she is now.
person JayDee
schedule April 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Addicted - I had a boss like Zalia once, that Sam's fate sounds like a lot of drudgery will be involved under 'er.

Unfortunately my lack of knowlege of the prompt word's usage/full meaning meant I couldn't quite follow how it fitted in here - my own ignorance betrays me...
person Anon
schedule March 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, very wicked! That was quite the cliffhanger! But a marvelous and powerful chapter, with secrets so close to being revealed. Excellent! :D
person Anon
schedule March 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Lovely use of the prompt, and quite the interesting pun, to set the wolf to guard the flock of sheep... Terrific! :D
person Anon
schedule March 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ah, Taess was brought home to see his Keth... a small kindness after all his journeys. I agree with Taess, though, that we should not be blind to the plight of others. Lovely prompt response!
person JayDee
schedule February 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nightfall - I enjoyed the descriptions of the oral, covers the physical and emotional side well. Good to see a bit more explicit action in the prompts, I think Nightfall ended up getting three or four bits in the end!