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February 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The title alone made me smile. I knew it wouldn't end well, and as you described each girls' goal I was wondering how the battle would finally be triggered. Of course, one good girl is enough to take them all down (plus, oh, a zombie serial killer).
It is pretty interesting that all of the supernatural ones would hang out together, but I suppose the could have subconsciously sensed that the others had things to hide too, magical things. Jack really screwed up picking that slumber party in any case, angel or no angel. Too bad, though, since Shannon, Kate, and Lupa could have been the core triad to combine forces from their three groups.
The idea of lessons being literal in Hell was funny too. I imagined there being only a few goldfish in the barrel and it taking a long time to get one. Demons like to screw with each other like that, I'm sure. :)
The only typo that stood out was about "doors blocked by her new power" since it was Jack's power.
Thanks for another fun and (almost) gory tale.
It is pretty interesting that all of the supernatural ones would hang out together, but I suppose the could have subconsciously sensed that the others had things to hide too, magical things. Jack really screwed up picking that slumber party in any case, angel or no angel. Too bad, though, since Shannon, Kate, and Lupa could have been the core triad to combine forces from their three groups.
The idea of lessons being literal in Hell was funny too. I imagined there being only a few goldfish in the barrel and it taking a long time to get one. Demons like to screw with each other like that, I'm sure. :)
The only typo that stood out was about "doors blocked by her new power" since it was Jack's power.
Thanks for another fun and (almost) gory tale.