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February 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, it's simply stunning how you manage to convey so much with just a twitfic. There's a grave, serene acceptance of death that is rather captivating, in a strangely mournful way. I really like it. I wish there was more I could say about it, other than "it was exceedingly good." Keep up the good work?
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February 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was beautiful, reminiscent of Eastern poetry. It's simple but powerful. I really like this, do you write poetry as well?
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February 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You m'dear will gimme a run for my money with gorgeous twitfics like this! Welcome to the prompts!
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February 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was absolutely beautiful, and a marvelous debut in the prompts! You fit so much into those few words, and I love it!
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February 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very powerful, well done within such constraints!
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February 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
19. Slumber
Rather than fight it, one is accepting the inevitable and taking it calmly, and making a point to not to think about it. Short and bittersweet.
(Well, it reminds me a little of this old Saturday Night Live quip: "When I die, I would like to go peacefully, in my sleep, like my grandfather did. Not screaming and yelling like his passengers." - Jack Handy)
Rather than fight it, one is accepting the inevitable and taking it calmly, and making a point to not to think about it. Short and bittersweet.
(Well, it reminds me a little of this old Saturday Night Live quip: "When I die, I would like to go peacefully, in my sleep, like my grandfather did. Not screaming and yelling like his passengers." - Jack Handy)
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February 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very poetic. And what is death but an unwaking slumber, eh... good use of the prompt, really gets a lot across in the short twitfic allowance.