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for The Xanthians

by SisiLorraine

schedule February 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love the new chapter. I can already tell Sebastian will be a great lover for Brennan...they are getting together, right? I can't wait to see them hook up later. Oh, and the whole Calaisians thing was totally cool. Good job, i'm so hooked on this. xxxooo
Colt
schedule February 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I can't help but become attached to Brennan. I keep rooting for him in survival and love.

Keep up the wonderful work.
schedule February 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty cool so far. I'm really into futuristic stuff, so this is right up my ally. I don't know whether I think Cain is cool or annoying, lol. Brennan seems like a great brother, and Lily's cute. I like the way you've developed these characters, plus the plot's really interesting. I'm looking forward to seeing more.
Colt
schedule February 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like it so far! I think it's very interesting and really creative plot. I have a feeling the Xanthians are going to turn out bad. maybe I'm just pessimistic. I'll be looking out for ur next chapter. Again, cool story.
schedule February 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this story! Not only is it very well-written but the idea is great, and I can't wait to read more! Thanks for uploading this to share with us all :)
person mw0627
schedule February 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story so far, Cain is very intresting, what a helpful little brother.
person RJaneyP
schedule February 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It seems the way your playing it, that the bomb weren't hot or radioactive, otherwise... no one would be actually left alive to go mad and run around killing each.
Wish it would be that in truth life, but truth is right now India has the bomb!

.... why is I think the Xanthians are aliens?