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for LOVE All Over Me

by Shaznay

person Sheireen
schedule September 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Uhm... I really didn't expect that.

Great chapter by the way. It will be really difficult now to wait patiently for the next chapter.
person yamiik
schedule September 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow im so happy you updated it was worth the wait i love this story its got a good plot not just smut i hope you hope update again soon ill definatly will be wait for the next chapters to come
schedule September 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
To be honest, I thought this story had been dropped. So I was overjoyed to discover a - much unexpected - new chapter updated this morning.
I love this couple! (finally they ARE a couple) Now many many interesting things should happen... can't wait for your next update!
schedule September 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Amazing comeback here! Hope for more! Are you posting this fictionpress dot com as well?
person renee
schedule June 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Damn... Bear really knows how to get a man he wants (or so it seems). When the bribe-gifts route doesn't work, charge/confront and pick a lock. That action brought me so much laughter but what Bear did after made me go "daammmmnnnn." I think they are both so endearing so I'll be looking forward to more chapters. Sandy, Jon and Darryl were great side characters too, definitely add to the fun aspect of the story. Thank you, I enjoyed this story a lot and the Mpreg ;p
schedule May 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i held no hope... but, even after so long, you updated!
what an intense chapter!!
person nivell
schedule May 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
First time reader and let me just say that I'm loving this! Also like the premise since the main character is in advertising (my major) and lives in Cali, Cali!
schedule May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely LOVE this story!!! I'm so glad I found it. I really like reading these types of stories (dominate/submissive characters), I really love Joaquin and Wade together XD. I look forward to reading the next chapter!
person Dragon
schedule May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Grate chapter!!!! I'm happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
person crazeme
schedule May 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story. Love the name of the ad agency. Joaquin and Bear are rather cute together. Sandy and Dee are adorable. Looking forward to reading more of this story.