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for LOVE All Over Me

by Shaznay

person Dragon7
schedule February 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I can’t wait to read what happens next. 
person Kayden Ess
schedule January 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh! What's gonna happen?! I can't wait to read the story behind all that, why both were forced to go without each other for so many years.

And yes, thank you for the long chapter. You always update with good lengths. Until next time! :)
schedule January 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I"m totally bawling here! WHAAAAAAAAAAA! So touching! I can't stand it!! I'm a sucker for reunions. First his horse,then his dad. I can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule January 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
love this story.
love this story.
love this story.
person BijouDuMon
schedule January 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! This chapter was so great! XD The cliffhanger nearly killed me... please update again soon! :D
schedule January 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You had me cheering for Bear, crying for Joaquin and Takoda, and hating Andre all in 1 chapter. Talk about a plethora of emotions! Great job here! =)
person Saminada
schedule January 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh WOW! AWESOME update!!!! I love it sooooo much!!!!

Now I guess that he'll go see his father soon??

And my gosh! what a big fight! lol :D

Plz more soon! I love this story! ^^
person leo'smama
schedule January 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ok,wow....I LOVED this story. Even tho J is a brat and hateful and just plain 'ole mean, Bear wanted him. He courted him and it was great! I love these kind of stories. Not too much angst, but enough. I am really excited to see where this goes and I know that J has to go back and see his Father and find out why his Mom lied to him. Why did she run? Did he have an affair? Did she just think that he did but never took the time to ask him?
What about Bear? Will J actually tell Bear he loves him? Let him in all the way? What happens if he get's pregant again? Can he handle it?
Can't wait to see how this finishes.
Good Job!
person DJfrdrck
schedule January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT
schedule January 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 9: Wheee! Joaquin was so possessive of Bear! He kicked some groupie ass!! lol. I probably would have done that same though. It's one thing to know your loved-one is getting hit one by groupies. It's another to witness it and to be expected NOT to say anything to the person(s) about it. They had it coming for rubbing it in Joaquin's face that they were going to try and get Bear anyways.

I hope he goes and sees his father soon. He really needs to do that in order to have some peace in his life.