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Aghhhhhs;ljflkjflkjfljsdflkj!! This was an awesome chapter! I can totally understand him not wanting to take the pg test because it would be soooo disappointing to find out he wasn't pg. If I were him, I think I would just play it like I wasn't and if by some miracle I was, then it would be apparent soon enough. But I'm dying to know if he is!!! lol.

uch an emotional chapter. I think Joaquin is going to deny being pregnant until Wade comes back and make a joke about him gaining weight. Or maybe he'll just say it's weight gain until his dad/friends tell Wade.

Please add me to the update list for this story. I really enjoy reading it and getting lost in the characters :)

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Please add me to the update list for this story. I can't wait to see what happens next!
(meant to add my email in the previous message...well oh well :))

Awh. Poor guy. he'll have his baby. All the description of the food has made me quite hungry for good food. curse dorm food. great job and can't wait for next update

OMG!!! Is Joaquin pregnant now...??? This was such a fascinating chapter. I loved their love letters, the reunion and the purification ceremony.

And as far as Joaquin's mother is concerned. I'm glad the bitch is dead. I can't believe she did that to him and his father. That was just evil and selfish.

This is one of the best stories I've ever read.

Just started reading your story for the first time today, just as you submitted your update of chapter 11.

Read the entire story so far, and it was an absolute gem to read.

The characters give the story so much colour and vitality, and their personalities are drenched with so much enthusiasm and charm, and it is hard not to love his friends, especially Sandy and Darryl, who are very vivacious characters.

Enjoy the detail about the Native Americans and the smudging - Nice to learn something new.

So…in his absence who is running the company? Hope he does not get ousted in his absence by someone else. Or someone bringing a lawsuit against him, he was a devil for the longest time!?!?!

Look forward to how he deals with the news of his pregnancy - possible baby girl. This could prove a traumatic time for him, dredging up of old memories, especially with Andre hanging around, making all kinds of waves. Or maybe he will be afraid to tell Wade, in case it happens again - so much to look forward to.

Hope to read more very soon!!!!

I'm glad Joaquin is working out things with his dad and I really like the native american info. I think it definitely gives this story a unique feel. I like this love letter thing going on with Bear and him. I knew it!!!!!!! I knew it when they had sex that he was going to get pregnant. :) shall be interesting to see how this all goes. I think Bear will be excited. great job!

<3 Amazing as always. I am eagerly awaiting your next update.