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for LOVE All Over Me

by Shaznay

person yaoifangurl
schedule July 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
PLEASS PLEASE CONTINUE YOUR STORY IM LOVING IT I SO WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!!
schedule July 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great chapters -only realised you had already updated twice when I read the latest chapter.

12.12

It is reasonable to think that Joaquin would not immediately jump to the conclusion considering his past. Something will have to take place for him to believe it is true. He will need something tangible and undeniable.

The changes in Joaquin on his return are nice to read. His apology to Eric positively received and he made amends by offering him his job back and his personal attention to help him build his experience.

Once again, adore Sandy and Darryl great personalities that steal the moments everytime they have their say!

13.13

Poor Joaquin, unwilling to accept that the usual associated symptoms of pregnancy comes in the form of morning sickness, and opting to alleviate the symptoms with the use of tummy relievers, and using a tummy bug as an excuse for the upset stomach -even after a fainting spell!

Believe that his stanch denial is not so much about his fear of not being pregnant as it is about his fear of actually being pregnant. He will have to address some very real facts: fear of losing Wade, fear of losing the baby, fear of having a baby, fear of the future -just my humble thoughts!

Hope that he does follow through with the pregnancy test. He really does need clarity and he needs to deal with the outcome of the results.

Irrespective, with Darryl and Sandy he will be with people who care and love him.

Look forward to more soon!


person JStorm
schedule July 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Morning sickness finally!!! Somehow while they were talking in the car i imagined Joaquin puking or something like that.
Does Joaquin even remember that he agreed to lunch with Andre?

A fainting spell...really? in the middle of Joaquin giving a happy speech. Pregnancy hormones and Bear have been making him mellower I can't wait for his mood swings and cravings.

I think Joaquin might just put the pregnancy test in water instead of actually taking it.

When is Wade going to be back? The letters are adorable but I miss the interaction.
person keyboo
schedule July 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Glad you're feeling better! Can't wait for the next chapter!
person Rustaam
schedule July 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Why would you end the chapter like that?! That's just cruel sweetheart.
person nextgrl
schedule July 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just read all 13 chapters in one sitting. I was a little dubious at first, but once the character fleshed out I couldn't stop. Can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule July 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
noooooo!!! I want to see if he's pregnant. :( I'm glad that him and Bear are still writing to each other. such a great job! :D
person JStorm
schedule June 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i think its hilarious the way Darryl keeps calling Bear 'Tiger'
person myrt
schedule April 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure I reviewed last time... if not, then I wanted to tell what a wonderful surprise it was to see that you updated.
I somewhat expected him to find himself with child during his stay at his father's, but I didn't anticipate the way he found out ;)
person Dragon7
schedule April 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic chapter I hope thing with Joaquin are ok and he able to have a baby, I can't wait for Bear to be a daddy.