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for LOVE All Over Me

by Shaznay

person Cham
schedule October 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Even though it is my midterms tomorrow, even though I have to prepare. I saw this story this morning, decided to read a chap before the start of my first class and literally couldn't stop reading. Holy hell this was amazing! The concept of the story was intriguing, the characters divine (being a female of lovely ethnic backgrounds, it was pleasant to see some of the same in main engrossing characters), and the writing was extraordinary. I am completely, dare I use the words, 'in love' with this! Thank you so much for writing this! It is amazing and now I will go in search of your other writings ... well, after my midterms (will power pending lol).
person Jai-C Anderson
schedule September 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just love your story, Can't wait for more. Just wondersing have thought of writing a story about Darryl after this one is finished? I would love to see someone make tame him and get him to fall in love.
person lovelycrazy
schedule September 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
and lovelycrazy loves Scribbles for the update! hmmm~ my heart feels so full. i'm so happy after reading the story. thank you
schedule August 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just reread this last night, so this day just became perfect.
schedule August 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
He finally took the pregnancy test (phew!), and we now have two happy uncles (or aunts), waiting in the wings.

Glad to know that Wade is proud to be a father with Joaquin, and Andre, relegated to the peripherals of Joaquin’s life, has no influence (or hope he does not) on the future Joaquin now has with Wade.

So, would Joaquin now tell his father? And would Wade, being the moral soul that he is, now want to make their union permanent?

Thank you for another wonderful update.

fortunatem@rocketmail.com (update list).
person criss_cross
schedule August 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
...obviously, me too...(but, of course, thank you!)
person eroburn
schedule August 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
this chapter is so cute.
I've never had pickles and eggs
but i am always willing to try new things
pickles and ice cream weren't so bad.


schedule August 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! A new chapter and what a brilliant one at that.. My favorite couple is back together.. I really love this story and I look forwad to a new chapter :D
person mc
schedule July 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i thought i had this story in my bookmarks because i was curious on the character named 'bear' but i couldn't find it when i had time to read. good thing i checked for recent updates and found this again (i rarely check AFF these days).

i love this story, i'm a sucker for mpreg. i love your mpreg world, basically because i'm also head over heels with your other story 'truth behind the lies'. you suck me into this world that somehow becomes realistic for me.

i hope joaquin is indeed pregnant. i just adore him and bear. i love bear most of all. andre, on the other hand, is such a jerk that i wish someone would push him off a cliff or something. the nerve of him wooing joaquin as if what he didn't walk out on his responsibilities 6 yrs ago. reminds me of someone i know.

please update soon, i'm dying to know if joaquin would really take dee and sandy's advice to heart and take that damn pregnancy test.



person under draco
schedule July 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nooooo. What an evil cliff hanger. Pleassee update soon, pleassseee. I hope you're feeling better and get well soon.