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for LOVE All Over Me

by Shaznay

person irene
schedule January 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much but what happened with your updates cause on twitter you said that the last chapter was gonna be up by Thanksgiving and nothing happened . I so want to read the next chapter so bad please update =)
person Karyn
schedule December 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this..... Is it actually going to end next chapter? Epilogue perhaps?
person Jay
schedule December 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
LMAO about Darryl...... Hmmm... Darryl really is a piece 'o work

Oh how could Wade do that to Joaquin..... Although from where he's standing it certainly looks a bit fishy.

Oh my... THE NEXT CHAPTER IS THE LAST..... gosh how could this story end so quickly!!!..... Say it ain't so!!!!!
person reader
schedule November 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i really love this story and hope you update soon.
person imaltht
schedule November 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh please update and don'e leave us in sweet suspense....sad there is only one more chapter to go but I want a happy ending with a baby and a happy family and wonderful friends and the last chapter....please!!!!
person Anon
schedule October 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
love this story, though a little bummed that Andre, the not-so-bad-guy is from Trinidad. All Trini's are cool and should get the girl (or guy in this case). Lol. Keep writing, I'm enjoying.
person lovelycrazy
schedule October 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh, wow. that's just crazy. my heart is aching right now, but i still love it! *sigh* Joaquin, Wade, you're both "ebba" i feel like shoving in your faces a hard copy of LOVE All Over Me and rant, "See? This is what's been happening! There's nothing to be insecure about, Mr. Bear! And Mr. Branford! You're an elite in the world of advertising; you should've known better!" gah! anyway, more power to you Scribbles-san.
schedule October 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm a little sad the story is ending. It's among my favorites.
person eroburn
schedule October 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh no......
I knew the meetings would get him in trouble.
schedule October 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Have thoroughly enjoyed this story and will be sad to see it end.

Wade and Joaquin were taking everything in their stride, and it was lovely, until the unexpected appearance of Andre, and the reaction of Wade, which for the moment, has derailed their (perceived) smooth relationship.

Poor Joaquin always left holding the baby so to speak. We have two sorry souls: Wade having doubts that the baby is his (though, why such mistrust is unclear. Or have I missed something), and Joaquin left alone again (which, psychologically, is quite a blow).

Ok, lump in throat moment:

“Wade, don’t do this. Please? You promised me you’d never leave me.”

Looking forward to the final chapter and if this really is going to work out.

Great chapter- loved the drama.