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March 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
just noticed you updated: soo glaaaadd!
my hope is for another chapter to follow this one as soon as possible. ;) i'd like to hear the discussion between him and his friends the following morning. it will be hilatious!
you still haven't really explained how mpreg works in this story, which i don't mind. actually, i think it adds up to the unprectibility (save for what is revealed in the summary) of the plot.
i suppose it's clear that these two big guys will end up together. but i 'll be enjoying the process of them getting to know each other all the same. to see how this big, sexy and wild Bear will menage to tame our sharp-tongued protagonist is certanly entertaining!
thanks for sharing... and keep up the good work.
my hope is for another chapter to follow this one as soon as possible. ;) i'd like to hear the discussion between him and his friends the following morning. it will be hilatious!
you still haven't really explained how mpreg works in this story, which i don't mind. actually, i think it adds up to the unprectibility (save for what is revealed in the summary) of the plot.
i suppose it's clear that these two big guys will end up together. but i 'll be enjoying the process of them getting to know each other all the same. to see how this big, sexy and wild Bear will menage to tame our sharp-tongued protagonist is certanly entertaining!
thanks for sharing... and keep up the good work.
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March 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just found your story and I'm hooked. Got one question though. When you said MPREG in the description, were you talking about the main characters or Sandy and Jon. I would love to see this story lead to an MPREG with the main characters. But, with only 10 chapters to this story, I'm thinking you won't be able to fit it in. Maybe you could do more and work in the MPREG, or do a Part 2? Either way, only four chapters and you've got me addicted. Can't wait for more.
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March 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay! He finally got laid! I just wish it was a smidgen longer. I was all worked up and you stopped...Tease...see you at the next chapter though :)
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March 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Joaquin is a lucky man :):):)
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March 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
...Joaquin is going to kill....EVERYBODY....except the baby lol.
Too good of a chapter, loved it!!!
Too good of a chapter, loved it!!!
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March 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Scribbles you are the best! Love the characters, love the long chapters love everything so far.
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March 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4 was awesome. LOL. Sandy and Darryl are going to torture Joaquin forever now. This story totally brightened up my Sunday.
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March 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I /love/ this story! I'm glad you updated. :D Joaquin is my favorite type of uke and Bear is pretty big and rugged (in a good way!). The summary says that Andre comes back...that should be very interesting...I wonder what the background with him and Joaquin is? Like how they split it up. I mean, if it made Joaquin not hook up with anyone for six years...well, that is a long time.
By the way, a while back I visited your author's page to see what other stories you've written. There's one (grr, the name escapes me right now!) that I really hope you update soon for. The one with Shay and Randy, where the whole town thinks Shay and his family are freaks. That story was super well written too. ^^
Anywho, just wanted to leave a quick review. I'm not sure if I have already or not, I don't think I did. Keep up the great work!
-Michael
By the way, a while back I visited your author's page to see what other stories you've written. There's one (grr, the name escapes me right now!) that I really hope you update soon for. The one with Shay and Randy, where the whole town thinks Shay and his family are freaks. That story was super well written too. ^^
Anywho, just wanted to leave a quick review. I'm not sure if I have already or not, I don't think I did. Keep up the great work!
-Michael
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February 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!
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February 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
drinks, Bear, long time without a man in bed ......... I would like to know what happens :)