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for A Reckless Venture

by KeresKarma

person Anon
schedule February 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm in heat now too:(
Gawd, way to cut us all off on a good part.
Sounds like a prelude to mpreg.
Even though mpregs are impossible they're cute to read.
person Lils
schedule February 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love it!
person Roya7777
schedule February 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hello and welcome to AFF ^_^

Well, I saw your fic yesterday and started reading it and finished the 14 chapters this morning at my work! :P Really I couldn't stop myself, I just had to go on and see what happen next! and then all of sudden it come to an end and I was like: "ohhhh, nooooooooooooo!!!!! , where is the rest??????" Really, you gave us 14 chapters all of a sudden and leave us hanging there! :P I feel like crying! I just can't stop thinking about what would happen next! If S is going to love D at last?! How? Now that D is in heat, is it possible for the story to go to the mperg way? (not that I mind, I actually enjoy the good ones :P ) ... so many questions ...

So here I am begging you: please please please ..... could you please update soon? (puppy eyes begging)

and yes, I forgot, Thank you for sharing ^_^ gr8 fiction! I love wolves ;)
person angelmay
schedule February 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I Love this story!!! I'm happy you came to this site,I'm a fan of your from y!Gallery.I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
person xKurochrome
schedule February 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just wow. I thought this would be just some cliche little story, but you totally surprised me! I fell in love with Dakota very fast, and he's just so adorable!

Excellent story! I can't wait for more!!
person Snowdrops
schedule February 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
All I must say, is that you managed to make glued to the screen. Read all chapters.

I adore you story, and what a cliffie.

Hope you keep updating this wonderful story.
person wizzy891
schedule February 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
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Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
person Chibko
schedule February 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like how their relationship is slowly evolving, though I admit the speed is a bit frustrating. Siruis being super bull-headed is as maddening as Dakota forgetting that regardless of his size and situation, he's still male.

It's interesting how the season is affecting Dakota... I can't help but wonder what this will mean. It'd be good to also find out more about the wolves Dakota occasionally sees. Can't wait for the next chapter.
person CandyCoatedCyanide
schedule February 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just read all fourteen chapters and this story definitely pulls at the heartstrings! Ugh, I felt/still feel terrible for Dakota. All the anger the whole tribe has for him is completely misplaced and grief can make one do things that are completely out of character...but for a whole village to allow someone, even when the village itself is grieving, to be treated like that is heart breaking. It's getting better, but the realization that they're all being completely irrational would be good for Dakota's sake.
I'm very interested about the wolves...it seems that Dakota is the only one who has encounters with them. I'm looking forward to finding out if that is true or not. I'm also very curious as to how Dakota's dad is taking his absence and if he cares at all...
Looking forward to your next update and best of luck.
person Aleks
schedule February 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WOW Great story!I can't wait for more!