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Ch. 6: So missed this story!! Went back and reread it from the beginning so I could get a handle on where things are. Your writing is hysterically funny. I love Eli and Jack together. They smolder on the screen.

Looking forward to the hotel hookup and whether or not they find Athena's book in her old apartment. :)

Dear God,this is awesome. I'm happy they're fucking now. The sexual tension was killing me, and they are HOT together. God, Eli is the hottest thing ever. I'm looking forward to more.

It's been a while since I read the story. I've been trying to finish writing my own =D I'm glad I had two chapters when I finally had some free time. Two really awesome chapters! I love the way the story is moving along. I didn't find the smut... smutty. Oddly i just found it sexy and a little sweet (that's totally the wrong word, but it fits). I feel a real connection with your characters and I have such affection for Eli. I think he's adorable and tries so hard to be badass. He IS badass, but it's like a tootsiepop, inside there's a strong center, but it's malleable.

I CAN wait for more because I understand the pressure of life. I don't WANT to, but I CAN =-). I was sorry to hear about your dad. I hope you're doing okay and getting through everything with the support of good friends and the rest of your family. Much love to you. Apparently writing hearts on this cuts off the review >8( good thing I copied it. Grr. Anyway I did send you internet hearts =D

Oh, the hotness... That's the way to go with Eli, Ajax: be direct and you'll get what you want! And I love Eli's gruff and undirect way of saying that he cares...
Thanks for the great chapter! Your stories make my days happier. :)

It's nice to see you working on this again. While the first time around I loved this story, it's even better now:) and Eli is a more believable character. He seems kinda... Sweet this time.

(5) Such typical guys blunt and to the point but I like that just because they may be sleeping together they haven't become all fluffy and flowery. And I wish I could go on about the actual character of the guys but strangely enough all I can think about is the rather steamy smut that just happened ;) Seriously you had to know with all the sexual tension floating around that when they finally got to release it it would be good :) Although I did like that Eli seemed a little put out when he found out that Jack was wanting to be a lawyer and not forever be a bartender, he seemed to have a moment of uncertainty but it didn't take much to get that attitude back.^^ They're a great pair and I love the differences not just with each other but within themselves also (i hope that makes some sort of sense^^). Looking forward to the road trip ^_^ Have a good night hun :)

oh oh OH. this is delightful :)

Love it. Just fucking love this story. Been a fan of some of your other works but god, this one takes the cake. I love the supernatural elements and the attitude of both guys XD It's some how so realistic the way Jack is all "never gonna happen" To "let's fuck"
So anyway. LOVE THIS STORY. :D

Hola! I Decided to give this story a shot. I was reluctant to because I'm already following like 50 WIPS right now. Sigh. After reading the first chapter, I'm sooooooooo hooked. OMG, I was laughing and cringing the whole time. Eli is a hoot. His comment "I can use those later on you if you want." Then...."Don't look so freaked out. I didn't mean the corndogs..." had me in stitches. Along with "Why don't you see how much of this (corndog) you can fit in your mouth at once hmmm?" and "You're a goddamn fun size snickers." LOL..Seriously, where do you come up with this shit? Off to chapter 2 :)

Oooh, chapter 2 was delish. Poor Jax, he doesn't realize he has powers, let alone, how to use them. It's like he's doing it subconsciously? Now he's getting his soul sucked out by that gruesome pale faced man...eek! And Eli is still after him as well. I'm dying to know what this is all about!