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I-I was ready for the next chapter and..it wasn't there D: I actually wasted a minute looking for the next button! That was a mean cliff hanger!!! Gaahhh! Now I'll be dreaming of all kinds of scenerios, thanks a lot!....Really thanks a lot, I loved every minute of it lol :)

Fuckin' hell! Eli is proving to be a much more complicated character than I'd thought. I do believe he quite genuinely cares for Ajax, somehow, but he doesn't express it well. But god, this cliffhanger hit me in the balls lol. How long is he planning to fuck off for? What's Ajax going to do without him? And just as they found the book (and started shaggin), too! I hope you manage to update this fairly soon, because goddamn I am too immersed in this.

Cheers,
Queer Junkie

I'm really liking the rewrite because it really seems to flow well. The story seems to not have lost any of the good sexiness either. Can't wait for the next update

Ajax and Eli are so volatile together, I love it.

Aww, Eli doesn't like that Jack is making him feel things. Too late, already too attached, can't make a clean break like that, we won't accept it. But ouch, his comment about chasing around LA boys stung a little.

(7) These two are just plain hot together and I love how you just couldn't resist sneaking your tattoo ideas into the story :) Although Eli better be careful with the teasing or one time Jack is going to snap, tie him down and do as he pleases with him ;)

Drama just seems to follow Jack and there's never a dull moment but I did like how Eli's reaction to Athena popping up was to just take it in stride like he's faced with ghosts all the time - course for all we know he is.^^ On the other hand I don't really blame Eli for being freaked out by what Jack did but I am surprised that he was actually willing to walk away because of it, seems even he has a limit.

Jack's reaction to the information in the book should be interesting especially since he seems to acknowledge some of the supernatural but at the same time disregards it, I suppose this could be the thing that really brings it home for him. Can't wait to see what he learns and also see if Eli comes back anytime soon and what it is that brings him back.

Happy Birthday hun, hope you have a good week ^_^

wELL THIS CHAPTER WAS SO MUCH BETTER THEN the old version of this story I read here.
Although I miss the triplets and am not really that overjoyed with Eli(mohawk), but the tattoes and this chapter in general is excellent and I can+t wait to read more.

love love love love loveeeeee poor eli.. he got scared that ajax would die awwwwwww T______________T

Love this story - I look forward to reading more. Looks like Ajax took a big risk, but at least he found the spell book.

I will deal with any residual regret for my sluttiness later.

*Best line ever*

(6) When doesn't Eli want to fuck, good god he's pushy which would drive me nuts but I suppose the fact that he's hot kind of makes up for that in Jack's eyes.^^ And speaking of Eli interaction I liked him with Sarah also, I always like the girls in your stories they're usually really fun and aren't there just to be annoying. I can't wait to see if these guys can successfully get into the apartment (after hotel sex of course ;) if that book is still there Athena must have one heck of a hiding spot.

Glad to hear things seem to be going well for you and I loved your idea for the tattoos, good luck with that :) Can't wait for the next update ^_^

Lovely chapter!
I like how Jack is equally squeamish and casual about having sex with Eli. XD