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for Haunted City

by Jblueblue

person eilidhdawn
schedule January 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
hi keep writing, don't go away
schedule January 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Its so excellent having you back! Didn't realize this was so close to finish, great work! I really enjoy the Toby/ Jericho side story as well.
person Itrasheditgood
schedule January 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great story, I loved it. It was a good thing I had read it through again recently before you had updated. I'm glad your finishing it, it's definitely been one hell of a ride.
person amothepirate
schedule January 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ahh! So good! I am so sad it is ending though :( You really are a fantastic author. I devour all of your stories haha.
person wolfluv
schedule January 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I'm still not exactly sure what his curse is though.... read ya laters!
person Anise
schedule January 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
(16) Happy New Year to you too^^

I can't believe that you ended it there, I really hope Ajax is as clever as he seems because this is one ugly mess that he's in managed to find himself in. Will Ajax finally be able to do the kind of magic that can get him out of this or do the others realize where he might be, usually I love suspense but this is going to be torture.


Such a great chapter and I bet the next one will be just as good, I can't wait for it :)
person wolfseyes2700
schedule December 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. Eli is my favorite character. I can't wait to see what happens next.
person keliw
schedule December 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I've greatly enjoyed the story and am excited to read the rest of the story :)
person Anise
schedule November 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
(15) Well this was an unexpected but nice surprise, I love having an excuse to reread a story that I really like :) And after all this time we are reminded of just how much Jack and Eli like to get into trouble, that was quite the cliff-hanger. I almost feel badly for Toby being mixed up with this guy, I can't wait to see how this gets resolved, it's hard to believe we've only got a couple more chapters to go. Good luck with the rest of your writing, I can't wait to see what you update next^^
person Anon
schedule November 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love stories of this genre, this is a great story. Loving the characters, storyline, setting...looking forward to the end and then hopefully to more fab stories from you.