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for Haunted City

by Jblueblue

person BubbleyB
schedule January 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Only one more? :'(
person Guest
schedule January 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for finishing the story. I've been following it since it was first posted. So happy you didn't abandon this. I remember in the first version you explained why Eli was vegetarian, why did you not do that in this version? Also you had this funny remark of Ajax hinting an affair with Turkish from Art Criticism. Would have been nice to have those 2 things included, but still, good job and please update soon :-)
person Anon
schedule January 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So glad to get some closure from that cliffie! Also, I'm glad Tobias has been claimed. I remember reading something about him in one of your other stories. A first chapter? A one shot? I remember it was sad. I'll have to go back and read it again. I probably don't say it often enough because I worry the repetition gets tedious, but I'm a huge fan of your work. I really hope you don't leave this site!
person amothepirate
schedule January 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Lovely!! I love this story.
person Memento
schedule January 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I loved this latest chapter. It brought to a close a lot of things. Now I can't wait to see just how Eli reacts to poor Ajax's condition. :)
person Anon
schedule January 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am a fan of your stories, this is another great one, cannot wait for the next update.
person Althydia
schedule January 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the new chapter! I'm so glad Ajax is okay - and Tobias is back with Jericho!
Poor Ajax, though, meeting his sister again, only to lose her for good... I hope Eli will be able to distract him from going into necromancy to see her again, or something. Speaking of which, where is Eli??? I'm still waiting for the happy (and steamy) reunion! ;) But it was a good explanation and conclusion to the curse. I actually didn't know until now what it was.
And I hope Ajax will, indeed, take more interest in learning how to control his powers and become a capable 'witch'. I'm sure he will have Eli to support him along the way...
I'm a little sad this story is almost over, but will look forward to the future chapters of your other stories. So, if you decide to take your stories elsewhere, could you at least tell us which websites you'll use in the future, please? So we can follow you there. Thanks for all your hard work on these!
And now, I'm off to read more about Tobias and Jericho... :)
person Nbsiren
schedule January 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story^^ Looking forward to the next chapter~
person wolfluv
schedule January 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I totally get it now! I LOVED IT! I really do enjoy your writing skills and stories that you write! If you do move on I hope you at least leave a message for your fans to be able to follow you else where! THANK YOU FOR SHARING! read ya laters!
person Spaz
schedule January 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hi! This is a fun story.