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for Haunted City

by Jblueblue

person JJ
schedule February 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yeah, I'm glad that you brought this story back - I love it so much. I can see the changes you have made...I can't wait to read more!

"You know you're awful mouthy for someone in your position. God, I want to make you squeak so badly. Yum."

Totally love that line...
person Toni
schedule February 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE YOU!!!!
Srsly. Like total love. :)
I've been hoping you'd bring this back. :d
schedule February 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You, chika are so awesome, there are no words to describe you. This was an awesome first chapter to this story and I can't wait to read the next one.
person RT
schedule February 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have read this before, I think. Sounds familiar... anyway, I still like this story and I'm glad you're working on it again! lol... super-shit.
schedule February 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have recently come upon your works (thanks to a friend) and I am now a dedicated fan. I like Juicy Fruit, Swallowed by the Whale and Treasure (which I can't wait for new chapters of) and now Haunted City! They way you write your characters and how the think and interact is amazing! I thank you for sharing your works with me and others.

Update soon please!!
person Chibko
schedule February 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Uhh what the heck? He got mugged because he went outside?? So bizarre! I like the main character's unusual name and how he tries to be normal with a normal nickname but absolutely fails at all semblences of normalcy.