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June 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well, I hope you'll find a version of the story you like, because I really like this story and would love to read it until its conclusion. In the meantime, I'll happily read and enjoy what you come up with for it. Ajax and Eli form such an adorable couple, in a slightly dysfunctional kind of way. I can't wait to see them get closer.:)
By the way, was the part with Athena new? (I can't remember reading it before) If so, what was the pentagram used for exactly (and is it still on Ajax's forehead)? Just to send back Ajax safely to the real world? Also, did Ajax arrive there through some kind of accidental magic, and couldn't have Athena told him more about the curse (if she knows something)?
By the way, was the part with Athena new? (I can't remember reading it before) If so, what was the pentagram used for exactly (and is it still on Ajax's forehead)? Just to send back Ajax safely to the real world? Also, did Ajax arrive there through some kind of accidental magic, and couldn't have Athena told him more about the curse (if she knows something)?
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June 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loved what you did to this chapter! I can't wait to see the next one! I love Eli...his attitude, his aloofness and his "hidden agenda"...
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June 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying the rewriting actually; it's flowing a lot better. I'm glad you've decided to continue this one! Eli is fantastic, but I have a thing for grubby punks. This is all so intriguing. Keep up the amazing work.
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June 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! I am unbelievably happy to read more of this. I was surprised to see Athena in this chapter but the conversation was kinda funny. It sounded just like real siblings. I have to beg for no more cliffies any time soon. They are so annoying. More please!
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June 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story starts really interessting!!! Although I really have no idea what is going on I really would love to read more!!!! I hope to see you soon!!!
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June 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've discovered that I like reading your story when my window is minimized closer to the size of a page in a book. Interesting first chapter...
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June 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sometimes I am in awe of your writing. You stick these little details in, inserting pockets of flavor that just pulls the whole soul of the story together. You, darling, are a fucking fantastic writer. I want to grow up to write like you ;). And I loved the first version of this story, but the second one is even better.
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June 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Re-writing the first scenes a million times is something I'm also guilty of xD It just means you really like this story and want to get it *just* right. The re-written chapters are also a lot of fun to read and I'm positive the end product will be fabuloso :)
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May 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuupppppppppppppppppppppppppppdddddddddddaaaaaaatttteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!
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April 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
loving this, can't wait to see where u take it! hope you update soon