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Chapter 3: Seriously, Eli is freaking hysterical!!! His beat down of the soul-sucking vampire was hilarious and this little comment had me in tears!: "You've got, like, a pink star thingy on your face, dude. It looks super gay." he informs me. I'm still laughing!!

That was BEAUTIFUL! And hot and kinky and OH MY GOD you have no idea what you did to me. ♥
I could stand reading more of this variety. You write extremely lovely smut, you know that?

I can't believe this is the first time I've read this. I love it. Love Eli. Love Jack. Especially love Eli, though :) His comments crack me up. I wish there was more, but the five posted chapters are very satisfactory anyway. (this is definitely a fave for me now)

Also, I wonder if Eli was just saying stuff to get that soul sucking vampire away, but when he said the "He's mine. I've already claimed him" I wonder if that's true... and... what that means ;) and I reallyreallylikedthesexbetweenthem; it was sooo hot.

Loooove this. Can't wait for more!

Ch. 4 - Cool, we are learning a little bit more about Eli (he can't stand silver). I wonder when Jax will figure out he's a werewolf..lol. And he's so sweet walking Jax home every day. Someone has a crush and it seems like it's going to be reciprocated by Jack in the next chapter.

Ch. 5- HOLY SMEXY GOODNESS!!! I needed a cigarette after reading that and I don't smoke. Maybe Jack and Eli can spare one? lol. Eli is fucking hot. Period. Damn! And I love Jack's reaction to seeing Eli naked. Hmmmm, the picture in my mind was the body of a someone who has done construction work for a long time. Yummy!

Ugh, they are so cute and hot and volatile together. Seriously, Eli CARES and Jack is so kinky and, as Eli so eloquently put it, totally "gagging for it." Mmm, their post-sex cuddling. Perfect, A+, etc.

Are you reposting this? Because I remember reading it before...and certainly pst the last chapter.

I am so GLAD that you took this story plot up again. I was going to be sad if after two starts you would have let it die. So yayers for getting to hopefully find out what the hell is up with jackie boy

Hi,

I'm sorry for your loss and I hope your life gets back on track soon, for your sake, not for the stories.

I really like Jack and Eli though, and I'm looking forward to updtes as they come.

*hugs*
~Jeanne

Aww, it's so good to read about Ajax and Eli's adventures again! And their constant flirting/sexual tension is driving me crazy - but in a good way. Is food like foreplay for them? Nice. :)
I think this chapter definitely has some differences from the first version of this story. Love it, though. I'd love to see some more magic-oh-my too. And wolves.
Also, I'm sorry for your loss and about RL being difficult for you at the moment. I wish that things will get better soon. As for your stories' slow updates, as long as I know that a story is not discontinued, I can wait as long as needed when the result is this good...