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So Eli is a werewolf! I was so curious what he would end up being. I feel bad for Ajax, becomming attached to Eli only to be rejected must hurt soo much. Even I feel the pain T_T I hope those two straighten it up soon ^^ 

That was really sweet, I'm glad it all worked out in the end. Thank you for sharing.

This was really good. I enjoyed it thoroughly! This was my most recent "rabid reading bender," and I need to take a break for a while now that I've finished it, before my eyeballs melt out of my skull. Great plot, compelling characters, delicious smut... All the things that make a story worth reading! Thanks!

This story is fantastic! I was starting to lose hope in finding any other quality work on this site! I read it through in one sitting (thanking my lucky stars that I don't have work tonight!) I very much loved watching the progress of the plot/character development and I appreciated that you took a quality over quantity approach to your sex scenes. I'm definitely going to have to hunt down your published work :)

Consider me a fan!

Yay its finished! An excellent ending to an excellent story. As always I love the picture of San Francisco you paint in your stories being a local girl myself. Totally looking forward to a actual copy of Art Critcism to hold in my hands!

I can't believe this story is over. I'll miss Ajax and Eli... But what a sweet sweet ending! Finally, the emotional reunion! And I really didn't expect the information we learned about Ajax's life. It's so sad... and makes me want to know more about how he'll deal with this new sister of his. Will you ever write more about that? Loved how it tied Toby's story together with theirs too. I really enjoyed re-reading the drabble on your blog too, so we know Ajax and Eli are still doing well after a couple years together. And what about Tobias and Jericho? Will you write more drabbles for them? Also, I'd love to read more of "Treasured", particularly now, because it happens in the same universe as this one...
Well, thank you for sharing and not abandoning this story! It was a very enjoyable ride and a fascinating universe you created. I'll look forward to more of your stories!

(18) My god has it really been two years and here I'm thinking it's ended too soon, congratulations on finally finishing :)

What an interesting wrap-up this is, I thought maybe Vesper was Jack's mum, I never would have predicted sister. This is certainly one complicated family and considering their penchant for trouble I'm sure Eli will get another opportunity to rescue Jack in the future ;) Honestly his reaction to everything was so funny, he's such an adorable idiot^^ I might be a bit of a sap but I loved the happy ending ^_^

Absolutely wonderful story hun^^ I have loved reading it and always looked forward to your updates and I wish you the best of luck in the future with all your writing, especially your published work :)

loved it^^

Omg I read all this in one day and I need the last chappie~~~ I live this story sooooooo much and can't wait for the end~~~ I hope to see it soon!

(17) I loved how you wrapped up the curse and how it was tied to Ajax and Athena, very creative :) It's just a little sad that Athena's gone for good but considering all that, I'm certainly glad Ajax managed to come through relatively undead ;) I do wonder at Eli's reaction, I'm kind of surprised he wasn't right there. He's certainly not going to be happy when he hears about this adventure, I can't wait to see the reunion^^ The little Toby/Jericho was also rather amusing, the whole group is just full of characters :) Such a great chapter :D

I would be really sad to see you go from the site and I admit that it’s purely for selfish reasons since most of the time I like coming here because everything is in one spot and it makes it easy for me to reread previous chapters or stories, which I do a lot :) Of course if you do decide to go I hope you let us know so that we can continue to follow(stalk) your stories in the future^^ Looking forward to what’s next :)