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March 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
A great story. Cant wait to see what happens.
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March 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have one BIG critisism. HUGE infact. Your chapters are WAY too short!
I can suggest something to remedy that. A light bulb moment if there's ever been one. U should post two chapters at a time :D
on the nik n grant story, u should get ur readers to suggest titles, n pick ur favourite :)
I can suggest something to remedy that. A light bulb moment if there's ever been one. U should post two chapters at a time :D
on the nik n grant story, u should get ur readers to suggest titles, n pick ur favourite :)
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March 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I had two chapters to catch up on! Where have I been? lol
I gotta tell you: this is the story I immediately click on when I see it's updated. This is such an emotionally charged story that I can't seem to stop reading.
All the flashbacks of when Dustin and Jack were dating, moving in together, saying I love you's together....when Jack was frantic b/c he couldn't get ahold of Dustin on 9/11, were amazing. Through your words I could feel how much Jack loved Dustin. Even the last chapter when Emma (who does sound wonderful and now I'm feeling sorry for her) realizes Dustin is back and now she may lose Jack, when she was recounting all the times Jack cried for Dustin, missed him so much. I'm wondering why he broke up with him in the first place. Was that discussed?
And Grant's mom; is she the coolest or what? hahah She's the best! And the little nephew, too cute, sharing the closet with Nikey, that was so cute!
I absolutely love this story! I can't wait for the next chapter and the side story w/Grant and Nikey! Great, great job! :)
I gotta tell you: this is the story I immediately click on when I see it's updated. This is such an emotionally charged story that I can't seem to stop reading.
All the flashbacks of when Dustin and Jack were dating, moving in together, saying I love you's together....when Jack was frantic b/c he couldn't get ahold of Dustin on 9/11, were amazing. Through your words I could feel how much Jack loved Dustin. Even the last chapter when Emma (who does sound wonderful and now I'm feeling sorry for her) realizes Dustin is back and now she may lose Jack, when she was recounting all the times Jack cried for Dustin, missed him so much. I'm wondering why he broke up with him in the first place. Was that discussed?
And Grant's mom; is she the coolest or what? hahah She's the best! And the little nephew, too cute, sharing the closet with Nikey, that was so cute!
I absolutely love this story! I can't wait for the next chapter and the side story w/Grant and Nikey! Great, great job! :)
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March 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Grant n nic fic first please :D
also, you've posted the chapter twice. I don't know how u do it, whether u attach the file or copy n paste into the txt box. If it's the latter, then I think u may have pasted it twice.
Great chap, when's the next one up? :P
also, you've posted the chapter twice. I don't know how u do it, whether u attach the file or copy n paste into the txt box. If it's the latter, then I think u may have pasted it twice.
Great chap, when's the next one up? :P
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March 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I was so excited to see that the chapter was pretty long, only to be disappointed b/c you accidentally posted it twice! lol
Awesome chapter, as usual! You know just the right words to use to make shivers go up and down my spine! lol
And yes, Dustin is the same Dustin, in reflexes and such, but different w/everything else. And as long as he can't remember the way he was before, and his relationship with Jack, why can't they start over? Start from scratch?
Can't wait for more! :)
Awesome chapter, as usual! You know just the right words to use to make shivers go up and down my spine! lol
And yes, Dustin is the same Dustin, in reflexes and such, but different w/everything else. And as long as he can't remember the way he was before, and his relationship with Jack, why can't they start over? Start from scratch?
Can't wait for more! :)
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March 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ahhh I feel you always leave us with wanting more at the last sentence :) Great job on this chapter too and I don't mind the slowness or whatever at all; I actually kind of enjoy it :)
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March 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Dude, it's like 1.18 am where I am but I started a Reading marathon of this story and wasn't going to stop until I finished, even though I've gotta be at work at lke 8 am! The only reason I stopped Reading? Because I came to look for the 'next chapter' button and shock, horror! It wasn't there :[ so I'm not a happy bunny! Please update as soooon as u can. Don't worry about timing the gaps too much because ppl can read it in one good lump, and it's always satisfying when you get to find out when happens next without waiting. And if it's already written, then GO FOR IT!!
Brilliant as ever. Would absolutly LOVE to read Grant and Nics story, how their relationship developed, and what it was like prior to the accident. Also what Grant and Ch's relationship was like. If theyr already written, n u decide not to post them on AFF, can u please email them to me? Cos as soon as u mentioned Grant n nic getting together, I was really hoping ud go into how it all developed.
Anyway, I'm off to bed now coz my eyes are starting to shut on me. Please carry on updating me when this comes up.
Thanks
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Brilliant as ever. Would absolutly LOVE to read Grant and Nics story, how their relationship developed, and what it was like prior to the accident. Also what Grant and Ch's relationship was like. If theyr already written, n u decide not to post them on AFF, can u please email them to me? Cos as soon as u mentioned Grant n nic getting together, I was really hoping ud go into how it all developed.
Anyway, I'm off to bed now coz my eyes are starting to shut on me. Please carry on updating me when this comes up.
Thanks
gg
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February 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this was a great chapter! I could feel the pain Jack was feeling, just thru your choice of words. At least now he knows that Dustin has amnesia.
But how can he say he didn't abandon Dustin? Of course he did. As Nikey said, he didn't call to see how he was feeling, he didn't write, he didn't visit. He totally abandoned him.
I want to see what he says in front of Dustin. Too bad Dustin left. Anyway, looking forward to more! :)
But how can he say he didn't abandon Dustin? Of course he did. As Nikey said, he didn't call to see how he was feeling, he didn't write, he didn't visit. He totally abandoned him.
I want to see what he says in front of Dustin. Too bad Dustin left. Anyway, looking forward to more! :)
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February 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Omg, I can't wait to see what they say to each other! Good job with the super quick update! :)
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February 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
awww i went "dammit" when i got to the end of the chapter...I really wanted to see what happened when Dustin opened his eyes! Love all the intenseness going on! And is Jack/Anthony going to cave soon? but the girl...haha like the suspense :) I can't wait for a real 'showdown' between Dustin and Jack tho...looking forward to it :)