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March 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Stop! Stop! I can't keep up! Hahah, I just caught up on the last four or five chapters! And now there's more! I'm not complaining, really I'm not! I love this story so much! I gotta read the next chapter.....I felt so bad for Jack, standing on Dustin's doorstep, obviously interrupting something. I loved the banter between Jack, Bob and Jeph (pronounced like Jeff, right?).
Ok, on to the next chapter! lol
Ok, on to the next chapter! lol
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March 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm really feeling bad for Jack now. And for Dustin. At least Steve had the decency to leave. This whole thing w/Jack is affecting Dustin so much. Same for Jack. I still don't know why Jack broke up with Dustin in the first place. Was it b/c of all Dustin's drinking? Of course, not trying to stereotype rock stars or anything, but I can only imagine that Jack drank/drinks a lot also. I know I keep asking about why they broke up, lol.
Oh, I forgot to say this in my last review: in one of the other chapters you just posted, you accidentally wrote in Gerald's name instead of Dustin's. Haha, wrong story! lol
Anyway....I really think Dustin and Jack need to talk more. I love reading about their "flashback" relationship. I love how it's interspersed with real life.
And it is amazing how even w/amnesia, the body will still crave what it used to know, like cigarettes.
Anyway, great chapter, as usual! Can't wait for more! :)
Oh, I forgot to say this in my last review: in one of the other chapters you just posted, you accidentally wrote in Gerald's name instead of Dustin's. Haha, wrong story! lol
Anyway....I really think Dustin and Jack need to talk more. I love reading about their "flashback" relationship. I love how it's interspersed with real life.
And it is amazing how even w/amnesia, the body will still crave what it used to know, like cigarettes.
Anyway, great chapter, as usual! Can't wait for more! :)
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March 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I think I love u. Thanks for another chapter, which like again was consumed way too quickly with my eagerness to know what happens. I loved the banter n obvious friendship between the prep boys, n was actually glad that jack didn't find emma in the end because he'd of probably gone back to her in that instant which is no good. It's sad to see Dustin resent his former self...
Anyway. Love it, can we have more? I know I know, I'm getting greedy n cheeky :P but ur like all the Reading material I'm gettin at the moment so y'know, sue me :P
the chapters, I went to chapter 13 n read on, so it wasn't too dramatically confusing. It's good that u mentioned it at the begining though because u usually click on the story n go to the last uploaded chapter coz I don't keep track of the number of chapters. So it's good that u warned me otherwise I would've skipped quite a lot.
Anyway. Love it, can we have more? I know I know, I'm getting greedy n cheeky :P but ur like all the Reading material I'm gettin at the moment so y'know, sue me :P
the chapters, I went to chapter 13 n read on, so it wasn't too dramatically confusing. It's good that u mentioned it at the begining though because u usually click on the story n go to the last uploaded chapter coz I don't keep track of the number of chapters. So it's good that u warned me otherwise I would've skipped quite a lot.
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March 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
aww I love Emma! And I want to say, "Go get him, Jack" but why do I feel it's not going to be as easy as that? lol XD!!
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March 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
omg! i love you and i love emma! i was honestly expecting you to turn emma into some psycho bitch who would do anything to keep jack with her or at the very least to keep jack and dustin apart since that's what i usually read in stories. it's so refreshing to read something different. now i'm really looking forward to the future chapters rather than dreading haha.
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March 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I'm totally in love with Emma! I could NEVER be as brave and as strong as she is. I'd probably drag it out and make Jack leave me. Pathetic, right? She's amazing. What an inspiration.
I am still confused tho. Seems I'm always confused. lol Why would Jack think Dustin abandoned him? They broke up, Dustin had his accident, Dustin had amnesia. Jack broke up with him; he told Nikey that in the hospital. He was the one who abandoned Dustin; he didn't come back to the hospital, he didn't visit him at home, etc. I'm sure I asked this same question before, I just don't get how HE thinks HE was the one who was left. And wait, why did Jack think Dustin died?
I think that's all the questions I have today. hahah I'm sure I'll think of more for the next chapter! :)
I am still confused tho. Seems I'm always confused. lol Why would Jack think Dustin abandoned him? They broke up, Dustin had his accident, Dustin had amnesia. Jack broke up with him; he told Nikey that in the hospital. He was the one who abandoned Dustin; he didn't come back to the hospital, he didn't visit him at home, etc. I'm sure I asked this same question before, I just don't get how HE thinks HE was the one who was left. And wait, why did Jack think Dustin died?
I think that's all the questions I have today. hahah I'm sure I'll think of more for the next chapter! :)
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March 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hands down, this story is AMAZING. I read it all this morning and I'm hooked! I love the way you write and I especially love the story premise and where it's going.
Hopefully you'll update very quickly and make me a very happy reader :D
(Though I'm very happy either way.)
Love you!!
Hopefully you'll update very quickly and make me a very happy reader :D
(Though I'm very happy either way.)
Love you!!
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March 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapter...glad to see Jack in doubt! Looking forward to the Nik and Grant story!
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March 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow 2 updates so quickly with the last one being extra looongg!! Thank you! :) I really enjoyed the last chapter with the little snippets of their time together--done beautifully and really makes the reader really get a true FEEL their relationship--loved it! And I also loved The Cure lyrics--fits their situation quite perfectly (melancholic but romantic)! And yeah short fic on Grant and Nikey sounds awesome--definitely will keep a look out for that one!
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March 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Grant n Nik, Grant n Nik, Grant n Nik
ps: this was my favourite chapter, lovely. Thank u for the update, lookin forward to the next one.
ps: this was my favourite chapter, lovely. Thank u for the update, lookin forward to the next one.