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"That's what parents are for"....LOL!!!! I must have chicken nuggets for parents!! I wish my parents would pay MY college fees!!!!! I had to work my ass off for the scholarship I have right now!! Top 15% in my graduating class...anywho, I WISH u would continue the story!! U really know how to write! I hate it when authors on here don't write in a sex scene until the 10th chapter!!! WTF!? Good job!

Sweet! You are such a talented author. The story took me on a great journey. You're really good at painting the picture of what exactly's going on...some stories confuse me. I thought this was funny, dramatic, and romantic. Awesome job! By the way, I cried when I read this because I'm gay, and when I came out to my parents they acted the same way as Arion's. My dad acted like I was a mutant. Unfortunately, my parents didn't end up accepting it like Arion's did. But I guess that's why this is fiction, right? Happy ending. Anyway, sweet-sweet-sweet. xxxooo

Too cute. I really loved this. you're a great writer! revelin and arion are so good together in this story the way you wrote it. it's like i can tell they're in love but sometimes in other stories u don't really feel the love, you knw? keep up the good work

Aww, that was nice. I was a bit pissed off with Revelin for not even offering a BJ even though he was the gay one to start with, n despite arion being het he still did it for him, it seemed extremely selfish, n I started disliking his character a bit. But then u redeemed him in the end.
Love the story. I loved how u managed to sqweez everythin in 5 chapters. It was nice, ur characters weren't frustrating, as in they didn't take ages to figure things out, everything they did made sense; coz sometimes u read a story n its like, why would he do that, it totally doesn't make sense, that's not what a normal reaction would be. Ur story didn't have that. Their actions made sens.
I also loved the regular updates which got me more into the story. It's something I'm guilty off to be honest, not regularly updating, so I admire ur dedication lol
good story, hope to read more from u.

I liked this chapter but it just seems like you had all the material to keep going with this story. Don't get me wrong it's good, it just seems like you're rushing to be done with it. I think you might want to just forget that last paragraph where you tried to end everything and just let the story actually continue. Of course that's up to you though. I like where you were going with it and I just don't like to see this story sell itself short. Either way good job with this.
Allie

Holy fuck; you're only eighteen???? And you wrote this amazingly emotional and heartfelt story???? Not to mention the sex! lol I could never write smut like that at eighteen! lol

Anyway...I just found this story today and devoured each chapter! The story made me laugh, made me cry, made me cry again! It was amazing!

You're an extremely talented writer and it was such a pleasure to read a story w/o any spelling or grammatical errors! I look forward to reading more from you! :) Great job!

Hi again. I really don't think you can leave it here. I mean the boys say they are in love with each other but that doesn't mean everything is automatically going to work out. Also I think that maybe Arion's parents will come around when things settle down and they get over it being so sudden of a change. So I really hope that you continue this story a bit longer and see where it goes.
Allie

I Loved ur new chapter, the part where Rev looks deeply into his eyes and says can we be friends, slayed me. Would love to see more, loved it xx

Aww, the ending for chap two was a lil sad, but more believable than if he were to declare undying love and leave all his plans for Riv. Not immediately anyway lol. Love the story, keep up d good work :)

Great beginning. I don't know whether I want the boys to make up now or years down the road (possibly after Arion is divorced and admits he's gay). Either way I think it could be good. I really like the way that their constant fighting has led into this caring for each other that Arion didn't even notice. I hope you keep up the good work and update soon.
Allie