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OMG! I'm so sorry that things are difficult for you right now... please concentrate on getting well...you have all my good wishes for a healthy, speedy recovery. I understand how hard it is going to be as my musician significant other went through alcohol addition and depression 2 years ago. He worked long and hard... we survived and he is a much happier person now.
Good Luck... "Fetch the Ghoul" can wait, your fans will always be there.

please tell me you haven't given up on "Fetch the Ghoul". I keep checking back time to time to see if there are any new developments *sigh* I love this story... please! Update soon!

...Child soldier?... coca fields in Texas?? *shudder*... How many successful escapes?...Chris dead(not a big loss)...Wow! Lumani's gonna have his hands full. Can't Wait!! Update soon...please.
Hope your arms is better... mounted archery? Awesome!

yay! it's finally back up! And the writing is a lot better- it's easier to understand, but also more detailed.
How close is this going to be to your first version? I noticed that both Lumani and Toreth seem the same- nervous outcast guy and smirky confident guy.
Along with that, I hope you'll keep some of the previous details- for example, I really liked when Toreth rubbed up against Lumani in the air ducts and Lumani got all shivery- sort of cute and suggestive.
Thanks for the story, I'm really looking forward to the rest of this!

ooOOoo I like it...very, Very, VERY much! ..."An-ti-ci-pa-tion, it's making me wait" Dammit! Update soon.................